Juste une vérification rien de plus

[Sarah18]

Voila je voudrais seulement que quelqu'un de compétent en anglais vérifie cette lettre que j'ai écrite.Est ce que j'ai utilisé les bons temps?Est ce que elle veut dire quelque chose?? Enfin juste une vérification koi!!!

Dear Julie,

I hope that your removal was good and that you are in a beautiful region. Do you have new friends? And your neighbouring how are they? Don't forget that if you needs something I'm here for you.

You'll never guess what I learnt yesterday! You know Nan?She is black! It's the first time of my life that I'm conscious of Nan's colouring.But if she isn't white,then neither are we.I can't believe it: we are aboriginal.

Personally,this origin don't change anything to my life because I do nat resent being an Aborigine.I think Abos are close to nature and loves animals, which I consider to be important qualities.

On the contrary Jill can't bear with being on. She is ashamed of our origins.She believes that because she is one of she is looked down upon by the others.She is more attune to our social environment because it is important for her to be accepte by the others.

Nan's behaviour feelings are understandable though we don't know what may have caused her, fit a temper.She is crying because somebody,maybeJill,has reproached her with being black.That's why she is so upset and loses her self control and uses foul language.That's amazing.

Please write soon,

Love,

Sally