Petites phrases

[maël - missme]

Bonjour. Pouvez-vous, s'il vous plaît, me corriger ? Merci

 

As far as I'm concerned,  Jamie Oliver won't be successful.

 

• Americans won't want to eat home-cooked meals because they love junk food and fast food is simple.

• To me, it will be more easy for parents to change their habbits than for childrem because they know it's good for their health.

• It will hard for him to persuade Schools to change meals at the canteen because it will be too expensive.

• I don't think that he's going to be successful because everybody don't want to change their habbits.

• If you want to change your unhealthy eating habits you will have an iron will.

 

Merci

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

As far as I'm concerned,Jamie Oliver won't be successful.

 

·       Americans won't want to eat home-cooked meals because they love junk food and fast food is simple.

·       To me, it will be more easy easier for parents to change their habits than (for) children because they know it's good for their health. <easy (2 syllabes en -y) est un adjectif court dont le comparatif de supériorité se fait en -ier.

·       It will hard for him to persuade schools to change meals at the canteen because it will be too expensive.

·       I don't think that he's going to be successful because everybody doesn't want to change their habits.

·       If you want to change your unhealthy eating habits you will have an iron will. <Même si ton exercice porte sur l'expression du futur, ce que j'ignore, la logique de la proposition principale voudrait qu'on emploie plutôt le modal must à la place de will  >> you must have an iron will => il vous faudra une volonté de fer.

[maël - missme]

merci JRB

 

en fait je dois utiliser la phrase exprimant l'hypothèse.

 

 

j'ai oublié le verbe be

 

 It will be hard for

 

 

Donc :

As far as I'm concerned,Jamie Oliver won't be successful. Americans won't want to eat home-cooked meals because they love junk food and fast food is simple. Perhaps, it will be easy for parents to change their habits but not for children because parents know it's good for their health. It will be hard for him to persuade schools to change meals at the canteen because it will be too expensive. I don't think that he's going to succeed because everybody doesn't want to change their habits. Some of them hate cooking.To conclude, if Jamie Oliver want to be successful, he will need some help, he will be patient and he won't lose heart.

 

PS : je me suis servi de wordreference pour certains mots.

Modifié le 24 avril 2020 par maël - missme

[Jean B]

To conclude, if Jamie Oliver wants  (*) to be successful, he will need some help, he will be patient and he won't lose heart.

(*) N'oublie jamais le -s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est au singulier.

La seule et unique exception à cette règle, c'est les auxiliaires modaux.

[maël - missme]

Merci JRB. 

 

Bonne soirée

[maël - missme]

Bonjour JRB

ma professeur dit : 

Perhaps it will be easy for parents to change their habits but not for children because parents know it's good for their health. ?? --> Manque de cohérence car les parents éduquent leurs enfants et donc leur enseignent qu'il est bon pour eux de bien manger

j'ai corrigé. Est-ce mieux ? Merci

Perhaps it will be easy for parents to change their habits but not for children who are rebels.

 

Merci

 

Modifié le 27 avril 2020 par maël - missme

[Jean B]

Bonjour Maël,

Impossible pour moi de me mettre dans les baskets de ta professeur...

Quant aux enfants qui sont des rebelles... ben comment te dire... ça sent le cliché, j'ai failli écrire "pue"...

J'ai peine à croire que tu aies pu faire partie des jeunes à qui leurs parents disaient "Tais-toi et mange, c'est bon pour toi" et qui répondaient aussi sec "Na" ! ?

[maël - missme]

Bonjour JRB

non, c'est vrai. Mais moi j'aime tout. Je ne suis pas difficile ?

bonne journée

[Jean B]

Il y a 6 heures, maël - missme a dit :

 

 Mais moi j'aime tout. Je ne suis pas difficile ?

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