PMA (2 textes) de alex72

[Jean B]

Bonjour Alex,

À l'avenir, sache que pour poster une demande d'aide sur le forum, il ne faut jamais poster à la suite d'un sujet ancien.

Au contraire, il faut utiliser le bouton vert en haut de la page à droite et lui donner un titre original évocateur de son contenu.

Exceptionnellement cette fois, tu trouveras ci-dessous tes deux textes corrigés et annotés.

En conséquence, j'ai supprimé ton post parasite dans le sujet "Correction texte" ouvert par coco17170 le 12 février 2017.

Bonsoir,

J'ai rédigé deux textes sur la PMA en anglais. Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes SVP ? Merci!!

Assisted Reproductive Technology (ART) is a medical procedures. This techniques address deals with infertility: vitro fertilization, intracytoplasmic sperm injection (ICSI), cryopreservation of gametes or embryos, and/or the use of fertility medication. Bioethics laws provide a framework for ATM around the world. The Bioethics is the study of what is right or wrong in new discoveries and advances in biology and medicine, genetic technologies.  For example: drug research, genetic engineering and the transplantation of organs.

The Nazis have achieved experience on the humans, like the Jews. The Bioethics is was born in the 1970's. New social policies have were adopted the such as birth control, the right of to abortion. The Bioethics growth grew with the law in the 1970s. The Scientifics questions are became socials questions.  A lot of litigations are were born, over 17 million civil actions per year. Rules of law are emerged to protect the people, the patients. The consent by patient must be mandatory, according to Canterbury v. Spence in 1972. If a mentally ill people person can affect a peoples someone’s life, the professional confidentiality can be broken, according to Tarasoff v. Regents of the University of California. The law has provided a framework for research in the field of bioethics. There are far more law schools who that work in the bioethics field, over 200. There are several techniques to have children, thanks to ART.

In 25th July 1978, Louise Brown was the first birth of a child to be born after IVF treatment in England. the research  fertilize eggs and Ovums are fertilized with spermatozoon  in the laboratory. In 1994 baby Audrey was born the baby, after IVF treatment in England.

The first birth by ICSI took place on 14th January 1992. In 1998, Tommy was born the first test-tube baby. In 2009, 3.4 million children have been were born worldwide after ART treatment.

In 2020, French senators examine the draft law on bioethics, including the issue of access to LDCs for all women.

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What are the legal bioethics issues raised by ART?

            First the ART is a problem raised in lots of countries of in the world. The ART is a right. Many Americans do not have insurance coverage for fertility treatments, that is to benefit  a have/enjoy Art. Many states are starting to mandate coverage. The americans With a  complete coverage, Americans use more the ART techniques. There are some health insurance companies that cover diagnosis of infertility, but not treaments costs. The costs is relatively high and depends on practices.  The practices with a higher chance of success are necessarily more expensive. So, the lowest price is 650 dollars and the FIV technique costs 39 000 dollars. In the United Kingdom, all patients have the right to preliminary free of charge testing by the National Health Service. However, the people who to want acces to  treatment These person must register on a waiting list. Many patients therefore pay to be care treated in private clinics. According to the European Society of Human Reproduction and Embryology, in 2015 in Europe, 157,500 children were born thanks to th ART. The bioethics questions on ART are prerogative of E. U members states. Each Member State has its own legislation. For example, Spain and France open Art to all womens. Spain established this right in 1977. In France in 2019, the Senate voted LDC for all womens, for single women and lesbian couples, but not reimbursement for all womans. The Croatia authorizes ART for single women and Austria authorizes only for lesbian couples.

 

ART is a technology that has treated millions of infertile couples the world over. However, this technology has introduced new legal problem. The art ART forces legal systems to modify laws to accommodate the challenges created by ART it. Difficulties in single-parent environments are present as much for women as for children: financial and educational difficulties. Women are entitled to social assistance and this costs the State. Precariousness is therefore created. The law legally deprives children of a father and this is contrary to the international convention on the child. It's difficult to live without a father. Surrogacy is forbidden in spite of social problems, measures have been taken to protect the patient. A law requires clinics in the United States to report information regarding ART. Such laws were implemented so that patients may be informed as to which hospitals are have good results. Laws result in couples traveling across border to obtain treatments that are forbidden in their native country. his Its name is  cross-border reproductive care, this practice represents 10% of the total ART cycles performed worldwide.

To conclude ART is a successful medical technology. This technique gives to hope to millions of couples suffering from infertility. However, ART also has presented new ethical, legal and social questions. Lots of countries have taken steps to regulate the ART. The ethical and legal questions that exist surrounding ART remains an issue.  The solution is to increase access to care to citizens. Due to the rapidly evolving nature of the ART, legislation is often late. Governments therefore have a role to play in making ART accessible to all. Why not generalise the reimbursement of ART?

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- emploi et omission du déterminant “the”

- particularités de l’adjectif épithète

- emploi des temps passé/présent

- règles d’emploi des majuscules aux noms propres et aux sigles

Sans plus tarder, tu as intérêt à revoir cela en détail et en profondeur.

 

[alex72]

Bonsoir,

merci bcq