Biographie JK Rowling

[Leana6]

Bonjour, je me nomme Léana je suis en seconde et j'ai une biographie à faire sur JK Rowling. Si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger les fautes ça m'aiderait bcp, je compte que vous. Je tiens à préciser que je dois rendre ce devoir demain. Aidez moi svp ! 

Joanne rowling known as J.K. Rowling and Robert Galbraith was born on July 31, 1965, in England. She is an atypical novelist who has succeeded despite many difficulties. She overcame depression as well as financial hardship. JK Rowling started from scratch and managed to climb the social ladder. From childhood, she became passionate about reading and began to write. She is 6 years old when she invents her first story, Rabbit.

She finds a real comfort in writing. She studied French literature and philology at the University of Exeter, then at the Sorbonne. In 1990, during a train trip J.K Rowling invented the character of Harry Potter, she was 25 years old.
In 1992, she married a Portuguese journalist and gave birth to her daughter Jessica, but she divorced in 1995.
When she moved back to Edinburgh, Scotland, where she ran into financial difficulties. Young, mother, divorced she goes back to writing Harry Potter.

In 1996, his first novel dedicated to the sorcerer's apprentice is finished ... except that no publisher wants to publish it. Harry Potter at the wizarding school will finally be released 1 year later.
 In 2001, Harry Potter is adapted to the cinema. The seven films will also have a great success and will contribute massively to the success of the novel suite.

JK Rowling is world-wide known and she has been awarded many times for her books.
The Harry Potter saga has sold more than 450 million copies and is one of the best-selling saga in the world. 
J.K Rowling is also an activist and regularly donates a portion of her fortune to many charitable organizations fighting disease and social inequality.

 Explication du choix : 

We chose to talk about Jk Rowling because we all grew up with Harry Potter. We are big fans of Harry Potter and we enjoyed discovering this magical world. When we went to England with Mrs. Vergnaud, we had the chance to visit Harry Potter Studios. We went out marveled.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

À l'avenir, sois donc plus prévoyante car je ne passe pas 24h/24 devant l'écran de mon ordinateur.

Il y a 2 heures, Leana6 a dit :

Joanne rowling known as J.K. Rowling and Robert Galbraith was born on July 31, 1965, in England. She is an atypical novelist who has succeeded despite many difficulties. She overcame depression as well as financial hardship. JK Rowling started from scratch and managed to climb the social ladder. From childhood, she became passionate about reading and began to write. She is 6 years old when she invents her first story, Rabbit.

She finds a real comfort in writing. She studied French literature and philology at the University of Exeter, then at the Sorbonne. In 1990, during a train trip J.K Rowling invented the character of Harry Potter, she was 25 years old.
In 1992, she married a Portuguese journalist and gave birth to her daughter Jessica, but she divorced in 1995.
Then she moved back to Edinburgh, Scotland, where she ran into financial difficulties. A young divorced mother, she goes went back to writing Harry Potter. <Tu es toujours dans ton récit !

In 1996, his her first novel dedicated to the sorcerer's apprentice is <1996 c'est du passé> was finished ... except that no publisher wanted <idem to publish it. Harry Potter at the wizarding school will finally be released 1 year later.
 In 2001, Harry Potter is <idem encore> was adapted to the cinema. The seven films will also have a great success and will contribute massively to the success of the novel suite.

JK Rowling is world-wide known and she has been awarded many times for her books.
The Harry Potter saga has sold more than 450 million copies and is one of the best-selling sagas in the world. 
J.K Rowling is also an activist and regularly donates a portion of her fortune to many charitable organizations fighting diseases and social inequality.

 Explication du choix : 

We chose to talk about Jk Rowling because we all grew up with Harry Potter. We are big great fans of Harry Potter and we enjoyed discovering this magical world. When we went to England with Mrs. Vergnaud, we had the chance were lucky/fortunate to visit Harry Potter Studios. We went out marveled.

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