Présenter un texte

[maël - missme]

Bonsoir JRB

Je dois présenter brièvement ce texte avec les expressions en rouge. Pouvez-vous, s'il vous plaît, me corriger ? Merci

 

The text whose titlie is "our mission" is an article. It comes from a website called www. mealsharing.og. The article was written by a person of the Meal Sharing.The text deals with the mission of Meal Sharing. The action takes place in several cities worldwide. The main characters are guests and hosts.

 

Thank you

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

The text whose titlie the title of which is "our mission" is an article. < Quitte à te paraître démodé, j'ai appris jadis que le pronom possessif "whose" ne s'emploie que pour un possesseur animé.

It comes from a website called www. mealsharing.og. The article was written by a person of the from Meal Sharing organization.The text deals with the mission of Meal Sharing. The action takes place in several cities worldwide. The main characters are guests and hosts.

Tout le reste est bon.

[maël - missme]

Thank you very much