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[Fiona766]

Bonjour monsieur,

Voici les réponses aux questions ainsi qu'un Essay que je dois rendre pour mercredi. J'ai dans l'ensemble bien répondu aux questions mais je ne suis pas très contente de mon essay car je n'avais pas beaucoup d'idée et je n'arrivais pas à les développer. 
Merci beaucoup pour tout l'aide que vous m'apportez. Léonie.

Questions:

1) The prime minister, Theresa May, has to satisfy the Tory in favour of Brexit and the Tory who want to stay in the EU: Leavers prefer to take their time for the negotiations, and Remainers want good trades to stay near to the EU.

2) After the referendum for the Brexit, some countries members of the EU change their point of view about Britain: they think the Brexit in the UK brings a separation about the population and an economic crisis.

3) With the Brexit, the migration system in Britain was changed. But the journalist thinks the UK has to open its borders to qualified people because they can influence and develop the economy with their pieces of knowledge.

4) Even though Theresa May’s politic was a positive result during first 100 days, the columnist estimates the prime minister has difficulties to deal with the EU: she must work to save Britain of a hard Brexit.

Essay: “Britain should continue to be a magnet for skilled migrants from Europe and the rest of the world” Discuss.

                Today, it’s not unusual to meet people with another nationality in our countries. This exchange of population is now possible with the development of means of transport and communication. With Brexit, Britain will change its migration policy and stop a part of population movement. But it can be a problem for qualified people who can bring economic, political and social pieces of knowledge. Britain should continue to open its border to skilled people?

                Generally, most qualified people prefer to travel abroad and develop their company in different countries. In Britain, there are a lot of international firms, and people who worked into can develop the economy with merchandise flows and particularly capital flows. If these companies are big, they can influence too policy and diplomacy with their impact in Britain (for example they can negotiate some tax) and in the rest of the world (with commercial relationship). But with Brexit, Britain will impose new taxes and rules, and it’s a problem for international firms who own factories and head offices in the country.
                Besides, skilled people can influence to the population because they have a different culture. Foreigners have to develop their social integration, and they can share their culture with language, food, tradition… This will spread social mix with different level: in cities, districts and especially in a school with foreigners children.

                Britain has to work about its migration policy to continue to develop this kind of exchange (economic, political, cultural) because it’s essential for the development of the country. We have taken the example of Britain, but exchanges are important too for the development of all countries in the world.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Questions:

1) The Prime Minister, Theresa May, has to satisfy the Tories in favour of Brexit and the Tories who want to stay in the EU: Leavers prefer to take their time for the negotiations and Remainers want good trades to stay near closely related to the EU.

2) After the referendum for the Brexit, some countries members of the EU change their point of view about Britain: they think the Brexit in the UK brings a separation about the population and an economic crisis.

3) With the Brexit, the migration system in Britain has changed. But the journalist thinks the UK has to open its borders to qualified people because they can influence and develop the economy with their pieces of knowledge.

4) Even though Theresa May’s politicy was has had a positive result during the first 100 days, the columnist estimates considers/reckons the Prime Minister has difficulties to deal with the EU: she must work to save Britain of from a hard Brexit.

Essay: “Britain should continue to be a magnet for skilled migrants from Europe and the rest of the world” Discuss.

                Today, it’s not unusual to meet people with another nationality in our countries. This exchange of population is now possible with the development of means of transport and communication. With Brexit, Britain will change its migration policy and stop a part of population movement. But it can be a problem for qualified people who can bring economic, political and social pieces of knowledge. Should Britain should continue to open its borders to skilled people?

                Generally, most qualified people prefer to travel abroad and develop their company in different countries. In Britain, there are a lot of international firms and people who worked into there can develop the economy with merchandise flows and particularly capital flows. If these companies are big, they can also influence too policy and diplomacy with their impact in Britain (for example they can negotiate some taxes) and in the rest of the world (with commercial relationship). But with Brexit, Britain will impose new taxes and rules and it’s a problem for international firms who which own factories and head offices in the country.
                Besides, skilled people can influence to the population because they have a different culture. Foreigners have to develop their social integration and they can share their culture with language, food, tradition… This will spread social mix with various/different levels: in cities, districts and especially in a schools with foreigners' children.

                Britain has to work about its migration policy to continue to develop this kind of exchange (economic, political, cultural) because it’s essential for the development of the country. We have taken the example of Britain but exchanges are important too for the development of all countries in the world.

[Fiona766]

Merci beaucoup. economical ou economic je me poserai toujours cette question....Alors que "policitical" est bon...

Pas facile!

Merci et bonne journée. Léonie.

[Jean B]

Concernant economic/economical, cela dépend du contexte et pour le coup je dois reconnaître que ça m'avait échappé complètement. Comme quoi ...