Critique de film

[sarah23000]

Bonjour, je dois faire une critique d'un film en anglais mais je ne suis pas très bonne, si vous pouviez m'aider à la corriger ce serait très gentil. Merci d'avance.

film review

I just saw the movie "An Inconvenient Truth (a sequel)" which is a documentary on global warming presented by Al Gore and I want to give you my opinion on this film. The documentary looks at the progress made in the fight against global warming and the actions Al Gore is taking to help presidents of developing countries invest in renewable energy to lead the COP 21 in 2016 in Paris. The most important characters in the documentary are Al Gore, the Indian minister, President Obama, President Trump and President Hollande. Al Gore contributes to the fight against global warming, unlike Donald Trump who is against and withdrew from the Paris climate agreement. I appreciated in this documentary how Al Gore invested in his struggle, especially when he helped India to have enough money to build facilities to use more money in renewable energy. I think I liked everything even though some pictures were pretty hard to look at like the bodies they were burying. I think the lesson I can take from this documentary is that you have to be careful and take care of our planet because it is in danger. This documentary allows others to learn that global warming exists and that if they do nothing to stop it, it will only get worse. I think that the group of people who could like this documentary would be composed of people fighting against global warming or people wishing more information to act better. I recommend it to everyone because it can educate many people and even resonate even if I do not recommend the most violent images to the most sensitive. I give 5/5 to this documentary because it is very interesting, educational and informative. It can reach everyone, from the youngest to the oldest.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Tu auras remarqué que j'ai supprimé le doublon.

il y a une heure, sarah23000 a dit :

Bonjour, je dois faire une critique d'un film en anglais mais je ne suis pas très bonne, si vous pouviez m'aider à la corriger ce serait très gentil. Merci d'avance.

Film review

I just saw the movie "An Inconvenient Truth (a sequel)" which is a documentary on global warming presented by Al Gore and I want to give you my opinion on this film. The documentary looks at the progress made in the fight against global warming and the actions Al Gore is taking to help presidents of developing countries invest in renewable energy to lead the COP 21 in 2016 in Paris. The most important characters in the documentary are Al Gore, the Indian minister, President Obama, President Trump and President Hollande. Al Gore contributes to the fight against global warming, unlike Donald Trump who is against and withdrew from the Paris climate agreement. I appreciated in this documentary how Al Gore invested in his struggle, especially when he helped India to have enough money to build facilities to use more money in renewable energy. I think I liked everything even though some pictures were pretty hard to look at like the bodies they were burying. I think the lesson I can take from this documentary is that you have to be careful and take care of our planet because it is in danger. This documentary allows others to learn that global warming exists and that if they do nothing to stop it, it will only get worse. I think that the group of people who could like this documentary would be composed of people fighting against global warming or people wishing more information to act better. I recommend it to everyone because it can educate many people and even resonate < ? Qu'as-tu voulu dire ? even if I do not recommend the most violent images to the most sensitive ones. I give 5/5 to this documentary because it is very interesting, educational and informative. It can reach everyone, from the youngest to the oldest.

En lisant ce texte après avoir lu "mais je ne suis pas très bonne", je me demande si c'est bien toi qui l'a écrit.

Si c'est le cas, je te félicite car c'est quasiment parfait. Sinon, tu dois savoir que ton professeur ne sera pas dupe.

J'apprécierais que tu me tires d'embarras.

[sarah23000]

je me suis aidé de google traduction mais je vous assure que je l'ai fait toute seule et pour resonate j'ai voulu dire que ça pouvez résonner des personnes. Je vous remercie 

[Jean B]

Je me suis aidée de google traduction mais je vous assure que je l'ai fait toute seule < OK, j'en prends acte.

et pour resonate j'ai voulu dire que ça pouvezait résonner des personnes

< Là, tu confonds 2 verbes bien distincts, à savoir d'une part "résonner - racine : son/sonore" https://www.larousse.fr/dictionnaires/francais/résonner/68660

et d'autre part "raisonner - racine : raison/raisonnable" https://www.larousse.fr/dictionnaires/francais/raisonner/66274?q=raisonner#65527

Suggestion > ...educate many people and even reason with them...

Je vous remercie