Critique cinématographique

[Bourbon]

Bonjour,

Pourriez-vous je vous prie m'aider à améliorer mon travail en corrigeant les fautes ?

Black sheep is an English documentary who was directed by Ed Parkins. He deals with a serious subject : discrimination more precisely the racism. He takes place in London and in the Essex.

As a result of the Damiola Taylor's murder, Cornelius and his family left London to the country. It is a reconstruction of the frightening racist violence that Cornelius remembers having suffered later and the extreme measures he took to survive.

We love this documentary ! Unlike the other movies, Black Sheep portrays reality : which distinguishes him from the others. We think the acting was really good for amateurs. The music was dramatic what we liked about it. Finally, we find costumes very realist.

Merci d'avance

 

 

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Il y a 4 heures, Bourbon a dit :

Bonjour,

Pourriez-vous je vous prie m'aider à améliorer mon travail en corrigeant les fautes ?

Black sheep is an English documentary who which/that was directed by Ed Parkins. He It deals with a serious subject: discrimination and more precisely the racism. He It takes place in London and in the Essex.

Dans ta grammaire, revois impérativement l'emploi des pronoms relatifs, celui des pronoms sujet ainsi que l'emploi/omission de "the", c'est essentiel de maîtriser tout ça en Seconde.

As a result of the Damiola Taylor's murder, Cornelius and his family left London to the country. It is a reconstruction of the frightening racist violence that Cornelius remembers having he suffered later and the extreme measures he took to survive.

We love this documentary! Unlike the other movies, Black Sheep portrays reality, which distinguishes him it from the others. We think the acting was is really good for amateurs. The music was is dramatic, that is what we liked about it. Finally, we find that the costumes  are very realistic.

Pourquoi ces passés ? La qualité de l'interprétation et de la musique est une réalité permanente, non ? >> présent.

Merci d'avance

 

 

Bonne continuation.

[Bourbon]

Merci