Décrire la couverture d'un magazine

[leamichal]

Bonjour notre professeur d'anglais nous a demandé décrire la couverture de notre magazine choisit en CDI 

Le voici mon brouillon , merci de me répondre le plus vite possible le travail est à rendre pour demain 

 

This picture is a painting , it painted by a painter 
 It consists of black background, there is half a head.
with yellow hair and yellow eyebrows. I chose this article because it attracted me the first time , the interrogative sentence and the dark painting table. I was wondering who can she be behind Donald Trump.I think this interrogative leads to show who are the team of donald trump what role does he play for Donald Trump. It's his teamwork behind Donald Trump.As chief strategist Steve Bannon , Vice president mike pence , senior advisor stephen miller, Counsellor to the President Kellyanne Conway . Those are the men and women behind President Trump . In  my opinion , it's very positive , they introduce us to the trump team. The message behind the picture is the people with whom they work for their mission as president. 

 

 

 

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

"...merci de me répondre le plus vite possible le travail est à rendre pour demain" 

À mon tour, merci de comprendre que tu ne peux pas exiger ici une réponse immédiate de qui que ce soit.

Tu as simplement de la chance que je sois disponible en ce moment.

This picture is a painting , it painted by a painter < C'est répétitif . Si tu connais le nom du peintre, donne le >> It was painted by ...
 It consists of a black background, there is half a head with yellow hair and yellow eyebrows. < Je mets quiconque au défi de reconnaître la couverture de ce magazine avec si peu de détails.

I chose this article because it attracted me the first time , the interrogative sentence and the dark painting table. I was wondering who she can she be behind Donald Trump. < wonder induit une interrogation indirecte, donc il faut conserver la construction affirmative =>> pronom sujet + modal + verbe, etc.

I think this interrogative sentence leads us to show who are the team of donald trump are, what role does he << Qui est-ce ? mystère ! plays for Donald Trump. It's his teamwork behind Donald Trump. < Les noms propres prennent une majuscule.

As chief strategist Steve Bannon , Vice president mike pence , senior advisor stephen miller, Counsellor to the President Kellyanne Conway . < C'est une phrase, ça ?

Those are the men and women behind President Trump. In  my opinion, it's very positive, they introduce us to the trump team. The message behind the picture is the people with whom they work for their mission as president.  < Dans cette phrase, on ne comprend pas qui fait quoi.

"Ce qui se conçoit bien s'énonce clairement et les mots pour le dire viennent aisément." dixit Boileau.

[leamichal]

Bonsoir , 

Excuse - moi du ton .

J'approfondis !

This picture is a painting , Plubished in I love English.

To being It consists of a black background, there is half a head with yellow hair and yellow eyebrows. The image gives a suspense.Donald Trump's face is hidden . We do not see his eyes or his mouth.We want to know is hidden behind this image, this image is very reflective.The interrogative question is yellow as the silhouette.Anyway , the yellow color means Donald Trump. It's like a play on words.

In the foreground we can see  the face Donald Trump  and the background we can the black background.

 

 

As chief strategist Steve Bannon , Vice president mike pence , senior advisor stephen miller, Counsellor to the President Kellyanne Conway . < C'est une phrase, ça ? 

The work team of Donald Trump are As chief strategist Steve Bannon , Vice president mike pence , senior advisor stephen miller, Counsellor to the President Kellyanne Conway .

Those are the men and women behind President Trump. In  my opinion, it's very positive, they introduce us to the trump team. The message behind the picture is the people with whom they work for their mission as president.  < Dans cette phrase, on ne comprend pas qui fait quoi.

Je voulais dire le message qui voulait faire passer cet image c'était son travail d'équipe à Trump sur son statue de Président.

 

[leamichal]

Vous pouvez m'aider svp je n'arrive pas à formuler pour dire c'est quoi leur but d'être derrière Donald Trump ...

Est - ce que je suis obligé de dire leur profession ?

[Jean B]

Un exemple de description :

Although the picture only represents the outline of a face where the eyes, mouth and ears have been omitted, we can clearly identify Trump’s face just from the fair hair and eyebrows. It is a very clever picture indeed.

 

[leamichal]

J'en vous en remercie de votre aide .