benjaminmuneret Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 Signaler Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 The Statue Of Liberty 1.Frédéric Auguste Bartholdi i a french sculptor of the XIXth century. It is internationally know to have been the creator of the statue of liberty. The city of Colmar, of wich he was native, keep of many trace of his professional activity . 2.This monumental statue is situated in New York, on the island Liberty Island, in the South of Manhattan, in the mouth of Hudson and near Ellis Island. From a general point of view, the statue of Liberty is characterized by its very big size, we speak about " gigantic statue " or " of titanic work ". She represents a woman dressed in toga according to the clothing criteria of the antiquity. She is in position standing, static, holding in the left hand a tablet near the body and in the right hand a torch. The right hand is tightened towards the sky. His inexpressive face demonstrates a certain tranquillity, of the insurance also. She carries a crown of beams and in her feet are a broken chain. 3.The Freedom lighting the world, more known under the name of Statue of Liberty, is one of the most famous monuments of the United States. She was built in France and offered by the French people, in sign of friendship between both nations, to celebrate the centenary of the American Declaration of independence. The statue was revealed in broad daylight on twenty-eight october one thousand eight hundred eighty-six in the presence of the president of the United States, Grover Cleveland. 4.I chose this work because I find that it is a I chose this work because I find that it is the statue which shows the complicity between France and rules which shows the complicity between France and the United States and which respects the common idea the United States and which respects the important common idea of " the freedom ", it is the statue which important of " the freedom ", it is the statue which is also very beautiful. It is the subject which some kilometers from our home. It is the subject which interested a lot me because I like knowing what interested a lot to me because I like knowing that represent the works which we see in museums represent the works which we see in museums or to whom(which) many people speak. tâche finale.docx
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 Bonjour et bienvenue sur e-bahut. Tu voudras bien renseigner au moins ta classe actuelle dans ton profil car mes annotations seront différentes selon que tu es en seconde ou en terminale, je ne suis pas devin. Merci par avance. En rouge, ce que tu dois corriger, en vert mes corrections, en violet mes annotations. Le 12/02/2017 at 17:09, benjaminmuneret a dit : The Statue Of Liberty 1.Frédéric Auguste Bartholdi i a french sculptor of the XIXth century. << Ne sais-tu pas conjuguer "be" au présent simple ? Est-ce que tu te relis ? // Tous les adjectifs de nationalités prennent une majuscule, c'est à mémoriser une bonne fois. It is internationally know to have been the creator of the statue of liberty. << Selon le genre du sujet, il y a 3 pronoms de la 3ème personne du singulier et ils ne s'emploient pas au pif ! // know a un participe passé irrégulier. The city of Colmar, of from which he was native, keep of many traces of his professional activity. << -s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est au singulier, c'est élémentaire. 2.This monumental statue is situated in New York, on the island Liberty Island, in the South of Manhattan, in the mouth of the Hudson river and near Ellis Island. From a general point of view, the statue of Liberty is characterized by its very big size, we speak about a " gigantic statue " or " of titanic work ". She represents a woman dressed in toga according to the clothing criteria of the antiquity. She is in position standing, static, holding a tablet in the her left hand a tablet near the close to her body and a torch in the her right hand a torch. << As-tu déjà vu une statue marcher ? Quelle est l'étymologie de "statue" ? // La construction correcte d'une phrase déclarative = sujet + verbe + COD + autres compléments. Autrement dit, le COD doit suivre le verbe. // Contrairement au français qui emploie l'article défini, l'anglais emploie l'adjectif possessif devant les parties du corps humain. The right hand is tightened towards the sky held upwards. His inexpressive face demonstrates a certain tranquillity, of the insurance also self-confidence too. <<L'adjectif possessif DOIT être accordé en genre avec le possesseur, règle également élémentaire. She carries wears a crown of beams and there are broken chains in at her feet are a broken chain. <<Plus j'avance dans la lecture, plus j'ai la certitude que tu as utilisé un traducteur en ligne et ça me déplait souverainement. Tu aurais également pu piquer directement dans Wikipédia anglais https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Statue_of_Liberty plutôt que Wikipédia français, ça t'aurait évité des tas de fautes. 3.The Freedom Liberty Enlightening the world, more better known under the name of Statue of Liberty, is one of the most famous monuments of in the United States. She was built in France and offered by the French people in sign as a token of friendship between both nations to celebrate the centenary of the American Declaration of Independence. The statue was revealed in broad daylight on twenty-eight october one thousand eight hundred eighty-six in the presence of the president of the United States, Grover Cleveland. << Tu n'es pas chez le notaire, écris donc la date normalement en chiffres. 4.I chose this work because I find that it is a I chose this work because I find that it is the statue which shows the complicity between France and rules which shows the complicity between France and the United States and which respects the common idea the United States and which respects the important common idea of " the freedom ", it is the statue which important of " the freedom ", it is the statue which is also very beautiful. <<Est-ce que ton clavier bégaie ? Récris ça correctement et sans doublons. It is the subject which some kilometers from our home. It is the subject which interested a lot me because I like knowing what interested a lot to me because I like knowing that represent the works which we see in museums represent the works which we see in museums or to whom(which) many people speak. <<Bon là évidemment tu n'a plus Wikipédia pour voler à ton secours, le changement de la police de caractères en est une preuve ! C'est du grand n'importe quoi et je renonce à essayer de comprendre. À toi les corrections à présent.
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E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 12 février 2017 il y a 11 minutes, benjaminmuneret a dit : Bonjour, je suis en terminale Dans ce cas, indique le dans ton profil. Entre nous, tu as du souci à te faire d'ici à juin prochain, if you see what I mean.
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