chouckette Posté(e) le 24 novembre 2015 Signaler Posté(e) le 24 novembre 2015 Bonsoir j'ai un travail d'anglais à rendre demain sur une enquête policière. pouvez-vous me corriger mes erreurs s'il y en a et me dire comment ameliorer mes phrases. SVP ce travail doit etre au Prétérit INSPECTOR: Hi ! i'm inspector Marple ! i insvatigate the crime commited the last night. NEIGHBOUR: hi! Come in ! What happened ? INSPECTOR: someone murdered miss LESPANAYE ans her daughter Camille! did you saw or heard something? NEIGHBOUR: No! nothing! Where the scene took place ? INSPECTOR: Here! In this building! NEIGHBOUR: OH MY GOD ! It's horrible!!! Really i didn't know! Believe me ! NSPECTOR: Where were you when the crime took place, at around 3 o'clock ? NEIGHBOUR: yesterday, i was shopping with my friends, then we went to cinema and we were watching a new film at around 8 o'clock p.m. Later at about 10 o'lock p.m we were dinning whith teyre in the Grandview place, the number 17! After dinner, at 1 a.m a went in myfriend's home until 4 o'clock ! iNSPECTOR: Hummm... Okay! Did you know the victim ? NEIGHBOUR : No, not really, because they were very discreet and i think they didn't spoke with somebody! Tey respected their privacy! iNSPECTOR: Ok! to finish to you have a justificative? NEIGHBOUR Yes I have! iNSPECTOR: Ok! give me theire! thanks you so much! Called me at this number if you remember something! Good bye!
E-Bahut yveslouis Posté(e) le 27 novembre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 27 novembre 2015 Le 24/11/2015 20:30:04, chouckette a dit : Bonsoir j'ai un travail d'anglais à rendre demain sur une enquête policière. pouvez-vous me corriger mes erreurs s'il y en a et me dire comment ameliorer mes phrases. SVP Ce travail doit être au Prétérit INSPECTOR: Hi ! i'm inspector Marple ! i insvatigate the crime commited the last night. NEIGHBOUR: hi! Come in ! What happened ? INSPECTOR: someone murdered miss LESPANAYE ans her daughter Camille! did you saw or heard something? NEIGHBOUR: No! nothing! Where (auxiliaire ?) the scene took place ? INSPECTOR: Here! In this building! NEIGHBOUR: OH MY GOD ! It's horrible!!! Really (ponctuation) i didn't know! Believe me ! INSPECTOR: Where were you when the crime took place, at around 3 o'clock (A.M/P.M)? NEIGHBOUR: yesterday, i (I toujours en majuscule ; je te laisse corriger les autres) was shopping with my friends, then we went to the cinema and we were watching (temps) a new film at around 8 o'clock p.m. Later at about 10 o'lock p.m we were dinning whith teyre (???) in the Grandview place, the number 17! After dinner, at 1 a.m a went in my friend's home until 4 o'clock ! iNSPECTOR: Hummm... Okay! Did you know the victim ? NEIGHBOUR : No, not really, because they were very discreet and i think they didn't spoke (avec "didn't", la phrase est déjà au prétérit !) with somebody! Tey respected their privacy! iNSPECTOR: Ok! to finish to you have a justificative? NEIGHBOUR Yes I have! iNSPECTOR: Ok! give (le complément ici, après le verbe) me theire! thanks you so much! Called me at this number if you remember something! Good bye!
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 27 novembre 2015 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 27 novembre 2015 Yveslouis, I'm afraid the above correction was a complete waste of time!
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