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[maxime789]

bonjours , voila j'ai un petit exposé a faire et j'aimerais de l'aide dans ma traduction .je remercie d'avance les personnes qui m'aiderons !!!!!!

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Miami est une ville des États-Unis elle est située au sud-est de l'État de Floride.

Miami est une Ville de loisirs et de distractions, c'est une station balnéaire renommée.

Miami c’est un peu la destination mythique des vacances, tout est bon pour faire les fêtes

Des km de plages et de tout ce que les USA ont à offrir de plus extravagant.

Miami is a city of the United States it is located at the south-east of the State of Florida.

Miami is a Town of leisure and distractions, it is a famous seaside resort.

Miami it is a little the mythical destination of the vacancies,

all is good to have fun Of the km of beaches and all that the USA have to offer of more extravagant.

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Will Smith, est un acteur, producteur de cinéma et chanteur de hip-hop américain, né le 25 septembre 1968 à Philadelphie .Will Smith est l'un des rares artistes à avoir connu le succès dans trois différents médias de divertissement aux États-Unis et dans le monde : cinéma, télévision et musique. Il est devenu rapidement célèbre et a joué dans plusieurs grosses productions hollywoodiennes.

Will Smith, is an actor, producer of cinema and singer of hip-hop American, born on September 25th, 1968 in Philadelphia. Will Smith is one of the rare artists to have met with success in three various media of entertainment in the United States and in the world: cinema, television and music. He became quickly celebrates and played in several large Hollywood productions.

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Cliché 1 ) Oui et non, c’est une grande agglomération, on peut trouver pour chacun en termes d’hébergements, de restauration et d’activités adaptés à tous les revenus. Miami a ses endroits aussi bien riche que pauvre .

Cliché 2 ) En effet, les personnes originaires de Cuba, Haïti, Mexique, Colombie mais aussi d’Argentine sont nombreuses. Les 3 langues officielles de Miami sont l’anglais , l’espagnol et le créole haïtien, cependant beaucoup parlent aussi Français et Portugais. Des chiffres clés : 57,7 % des habitants de Miami sont nés à l'étranger, et 76,2 % parlent une autre langue que l’anglais.

Cliché 3 & 4)

Miami possède un climat avec des étés chauds et humides, comme dans les Caraïbes, des hivers doux et secs. Il existe donc une saison humide de mai à octobre, qui coïncide avec le passage des cyclones, et une saison sèche le reste de l’année. Des fronts froids peuvent toucher la région entre la fin octobre et le mois de mars.

Miami doit son climat à sa proximité avec le tropique du Cancer, à sa situation littorale et à la présence du Gulf Stream. En été, les températures sont supérieures à 30 °C et des orages se développent souvent dans l’après-midi. En hiver, elles sont comprises entre 15 la nuit et 25 °C le jour.

Cliché 5 ) oui , miami est une ville très riche . grace a ses nombreux endroits , miami fait partit des villes les plus visté par les millionnaires . mais ce n’est pas tous , une grande majeur parti des stars sont a miami .

1) Yes and not, it is a great urban area, one can find for each one in terms of accommodation, restoration and activities adapted to all the incomes. Miami has its places as well rich as poor.

Stereotype 2) Indeed, the people originating in Cuba, Haiti, Mexico, Colombia but also of Argentina are numerous. The 3 official languages of Miami are English, Spanish and the Haitian Creole, however much speak also French and Portuguese. Key figures: 57,7% of the inhabitants of Miami were born abroad, and 76,2% speak another language that English.

Stereotype 3 & 4)

Miami has a climate with hot and wet summers, as in the Caribbean, of the mild and dry winters. There thus exists a wet season from May to October, which coincides with the passage of the cyclones, and a season dries the rest of the year. Cold faces can touch the area between at the end of October and March.

Miami owes its climate with its proximity with the tropic of Cancer, with its littoral situation and the presence of the Gulf Stream. In summer, the temperatures are higher than 30 °C and of the storms often develop in the afternoon. In winter, they lie between 15 the night and 25 °C the day.

Stereotype 5) yes, Miami is a very rich city. grace has its many places, Miami made left the cities more visté by the millionaires. but they all are not, large a major party of the stars are has Miami.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Au delà de ta mise en page qui ne présente guère d'intérêt, ta traduction pue l'automate et comporte des copiés-collés évidents, ce qui me fait renoncer à la corriger.

Par contre, si tu soumets le résultat d'un travail personnel, alors je me ferai un plaisir d'y jeter un oeil.

[maxime789]

merci de m'avoir répondu , !!!

voici les text que j'ai soigneusement rédiger ( mais attention les fautes :-( , dsl )

j'ai utilé dumped pour cliché , est-ce un bon mot ???

mon text 1 traduit : Miami i'ts a city of the United States she is situated in the southeast of the State of Florida.

Miami is a City of leisure activities and entertainments, it's a famous sea resorts.

Miami it's a little mythical destination of the holidays , everything is good to make the parties

Km of beaches and all that the usa have to offer of more extravagant. ( je nse sais pas trop si sa se dit comme sa ! )

mon text 2 traduit : Will Smith, is an actor, film producer and American hip-hop singer, he born on September 25th, 1968 in Philadelphia .Will Smith is one of the rare artists to have known the success in three various media of entertainment in the United States and in the world: cinema, television and music. He quickly became famous ( ??? ) and played in several big Hollywood productions.

mon texte 2 traduit : Dumped 1) Yes and no, it's a big over city, we can find for each in terms of hosting, restoration and activities adapted to all the income. Miami has its places for all rich as poor.

Dumped 2) Indeed, the people native of Cuba, Haiti, Mexico, Colombia but also of Argentina are very ! three official languages of Miami , there are English, Spanish and Haitian Creole, however many people also speak French people and the Portuguese. Key figures: 57,7 % of the inhabitants of Miami were born abroad,( ,?? ° ) and 76,2 % speak another language than English !

mon texte 3 traduit : Dumped 3 and 4)

Miami possesses a hot climate in ( ?? ) summers, as in the Caribbean, winters soft and dry. There is thus a wet season from May till October, which coincides with the passage of cyclones, and a dry season the rest of the year. Cold fronts can touch the region between the end of October and March.

mon texte 3 , suite = Miami owes most superior to 30 °C and thunderstorms often develop in the afternoon. In winter, they are between 15 the night and 25 °C in the day .

Dumped 5) yes, Miami is a very rich city. favor has its numerous places, made Miami left cities most visited by the millionaires. But it's not all, big major left one the stars are has Miami !

**** merci , si vous m'aider dans ma correction ( jespère n'avoir fait pas beaucoup de fautes ! )

[Jean B]

mon text 1 traduit : Miami i'ts is a city of the United States she which is situated in the southeast of the State of Florida. - Pas de double sujet en anglais et pronom it pour les choses.

Miami is a city of leisure activities and entertainments, it's a famous seaside resort.

Miami it's a little mythical holiday destination of the holidays, everything is good to make the have fun and parties Sauf exceptions, make a le sens de faire / fabriquer.

Km There are miles of beaches and all that the USA have to offer of more extravagant / wild / crazy.

mon text 2 traduit : Will Smith is an actor, film producer and American hip-hop singer, he born on September 25th, 1968 in Philadelphia. Will Smith is one of the rare artists to have known the success been successful in three various media of entertainment in the United States and in the world: cinema, television and music. He quickly became famous and played in several big Hollywood productions.

mon texte 2 traduit : Dumped A cliché <Les britanniques nous ont emprunté le mot. 1) Yes and no, it's a big over city urban area where everyone we can find for each in terms of hosting accommodation, restoration catering and activities adapted to all the income. Miami has its places for all, rich as or/and poor.

Dumped A cliché 2) Indeed, there are many people native of Cuba, Haiti, Mexico, Colombia but also (of) Argentina are very ! The three official languages of Miami , there are English, Spanish and Haitian Creole. Nouvelle phrase> However many people also speak French people and the Portuguese.<Pas d'article devant les noms de langues. Key figures: 57,7 % of the inhabitants of Miami were born abroad, and 76,2 % speak another language than English !

mon texte 3 traduit : Clichés 3 and 4)

Miami possesses has a hot climate with humid summers, as in the Caribbean, winters soft mild and dry winters. <Les adjectifs se placent DEVANT le nom. Thus there is a wet season from May till October, which coincides with the passage of cyclones / hurricanes, and a dry season the rest of the year. Cold fronts can touch the region between the end of October and March.

The climate in Miami is due to the fact that it's close to the tropic of Cancer, close to the coast and that it is under the influence of the Gulf Stream.

In summer, temperatures exceed 30 °C and thunderstorms often develop in the afternoon. In winter, they are range between 15 ° the at night and 25 °C in the daytime.

Cliché 5) yes, Miami is a very rich city. favor has Thanks to its numerous places made Miami left is part of cities most visited cities by the millionaires. <"the" ne s'emploie pas devant un nom employé dans la généralité. But it's not all, big major left one the most / the majority of / stars are has in Miami !

Puisque tu m'as tout l'air d'être un gros fainéant plus têtu qu'un troupeau de bourricots, tu n'arriveras à rien tant que tu n'auras pas compris l'inanité du traducteur automatique.

Cet outil ne fait rien d'autre que reproduire bêtement toutes les fautes que tu commets en français et Dieu sait que tu le massacres allègrement !

Alors, met-toi au travail sérieusement et révise à fond toutes les bases du premier cycle que tu n'as pas encore acquises car il est presque déjà trop tard.

Te voilà averti.