Dialogue Entre Un Inspecteur Et Un Suspect

[oce1998r]

Bonjour je dois faire un dialogue entre un inspecteur et un suspect nommé James.

Il est suspect d'avoir tué son oncle James:

1 (Comment était vos relacions avec votre oncle TObias ?)

How did you fell with your uncle Tobias ?

-> I loved him, when I was younger I passed many time with him during the holidays.

We are really collusive. Now I am sad because my Uncle Tobias is dead

(je l'aimais beaucoup, quand j'étais petit je passais beaucoup de temps avec lui pendant les vacances. Nous étions vraiment complice. Maintenant je suis triste parceque mon oncle Tobias est mort)

2 Where did you are when your uncle was dead ?

.(Ou étiez vous quand votre oncle est mort)

-> I was to work. This day I have to meet my manager to do a balance with him.

(Il me manques deux questions à trouver pour qu'il puisse dire la vérité a la fin)

5 I found DNA of the paper with salive How did you explain his your DNA ?

( J'ai trouvé de la l'ADN sur un papier avec de la salive comment expliquez-vous que c'est votre adn ?)

->

6 Why did you kill your uncle ?

I receveil a note from my uncle which's said he didn't want me to marryn I haven't got any money and I wan't to kill my uncle before he could speak to his lawyer. I'm really Sorry I was Scared but quite frankly I killed my uncle

[devas29]

  Le 14/03/2014 à 10:18, oce1998r a dit :

1 (Comment était vos relacions avec votre oncle TObias ?)

How did you fell get on with your uncle Tobias ? d'où sort fell ici???

-> I loved him, when I was younger I passed many time with him during the holidays. When I was a little girl/boy I used to spent a lot of time with him during holidays.

We are really collusive. temps + vocabulaire We were very close Now I am sad because my Uncle Tobias is dead

2 Where did you are when your uncle was dead ? le verbe be est son propre auxiliaire, on ne peut pas avoir 2 auxiliaires à suivre

Where were you when your uncle died?

-> I was to work. This day I have to meet my manager to do a balance ?????with him. tout est à revoir dans cette phrase !

I was working. That day I had to meet my manager to ???

5 I found DNA of the paper with salive How did you explain his your DNA ?

->I have found some DNA from saliva on a paper, can you explain the fact that / how come the sample maches your DNA?

6 Why did you kill your uncle ?

I receveil a note from my uncle which's said he didn't want me to marryn I haven't got any money and I wan't to kill my uncle before he could speak to his lawyer. I'm really Sorry I was Scared but quite frankly I killed my uncle

je te laisserai corriger la dernière phrase, d'une part parce le sens est assez flou (marier qui ?) et de l'autre parce qu'il me semble que tu n'as pas fait beaucoup d'efforts dans l'ensemble: la grammaire est déplorable et l'orthographe des mots est quelques fois fantaisiste sans raison apparente sinon une grande négligence de ta part.

[oce1998r]

Merci beaucoup pour cette réponse oui j'ai trouver ça dans le dictionnaire (do a balance) pour faire un bilan :/

6 Why did you kill your uncle ?

I receveiD a note from my uncle WHICH said he didn't want me to marrY I haven't got any money and I waNT to kill my uncle before he could speak to his lawyer. I'm really Sorry I was Scared but quite frankly I killed my uncle

[devas29]

  Le 15/03/2014 à 21:53, oce1998r a dit :

Merci beaucoup pour cette réponse oui j'ai trouver ça dans le dictionnaire (do a balance) pour faire un bilan :/

oui mail il faut savoir bien consulter un dictionnaire !! to draw a balance c'est faire un bilan comptable!!! sinon c'est to assess/ make an assessment

6 Why did you kill your uncle ?

I receveiD a note from my uncle WHICH said he didn't want me to marrY/ to get married I haven't got any money and I waNTed to kill my uncle before he could speak to his lawyer. I'm really Sorry I was Scared/ but quite frankly I killed my uncle / mal dit

[oce1998r]

Merci beaucoup pour avoir pris le temps de me corriger !!!

Du coup est ce que ça va si dans la question 5 je réponds : I promise you that I am guilty.When I wrote a letter, I put my pen in my mouth.

[oce1998r]

Et est ce que cela va si l'inspecteur dit : I was found guilty of the murderer of Tobias :/ désolé je confond un peu tout je crois !

3 I was found you set out on his lawyer ! Now How did you explain that I found the note of the train times in a basket ?

-> I don't know maybe my uncle wanted to take train to saw me ! I have been so busy with my work that we haven't seen much of each other lately.

4- Ok ! We know that your uncle is left-handing, we found your uncle with the weapon in his left hand, and the letter who received (que vous avez reçu) was writting by a personn who is right-handing.

-> Yes I'm right-handing but my uncle may have killed him with his left hand

but I'm sur he is right-handing like me

Ca va ? :/