Arcalionne Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 Bonjour ! Je viens de m'inscrire spécialement pour un devoir d'anglais qui me pose des problèmes...voilà le sujet c'est "Raconter votre meilleur souvenir en anglais" après plusieurs réflexions j'en ai trouvé un ! : My best memory happened when i was 10 years old, I traveled to Egypt. I was so happy because I trully wanted to see the Egyptian Pyramids. The airplane landed at the evening but it was hot ! We arrived at the hotel, rooms were very nice and beautiful. The next day we visited Egyptian Pyramids !! It was so awesome ! Then we went to the souk my mother was completely fascinated and bought a lot... After we returned to the hotel. My sister and I went to the beach and we swam, and in evening we rode horses it was so amazing ! Voilà je pense qu'il y a beaucoup de fautes mais bon j'espère qu'on arrive à comprendre, j'aimerais bien que quelqu’un m'aide à le corriger s'il vous plait Merci d'avance
huguesmorand Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 My best memory happened when I was 10, I went to Egypt. I was so happy because I trully wanted to see the Egyptian pyramids. The plane landed in the evening, but it was hot! We arrived at the hotel, the rooms were very nice and beautiful. The next day we visited the Egyptian pyramids! It was so great! Then we went to the souk my mother was completely fascinated and bought a lot ... After we returned to the hotel. My sister and I went to the beach and we swam, and in the evening we rode horses, it was so amazing! (J' essayer de corriger mais je ne suis pas sur de moi).
Arcalionne Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 d'accord merci quand même =)
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 12 mai 2013 Bonjour, D'abord bravo à vous deux, si, si. C'est plutôt rare en effet de lire du bon anglais par ici et d'autant plus remarquable que vous n'êtes qu'en quatrième. Donc, je vais me permettre de "pinailler" sur des détails et/ou donner des variantes. Le 12/05/2013 à 14:58, Arcalionne a dit : My best memory happened dates back to the days(*) when I was 10 years old, I traveled to Egypt. I was so happy because I trully wanted to see the Egyptian pyramids. The airplane landed at in the evening but it was hot ! We arrived at the hotel, rooms were very nice and beautiful. The next day we visited Egyptian the pyramids! It was so awesome! Then we went to the souk, my mother was completely fascinated and bought a lot... After Later we returned to the hotel. My sister and I went to the beach (**) seaside where we had a swim/swam, and in evening we went horse-riding/rode horses it was so amazing! (*) to date back to...= remonter (dans le temps) à... (**) On ne se baigne pas sur le plage, même en Égypte.
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