Re Besoin D'une Petite Correction

[maud976]

Bonjour,

Tout d’abord merci de m’accorder un peu de votre temps

Pourriez vous m’indiquer les fautes d’orthographes, de grammaire et toutes autres choses que ne vous semblent pas correct. Certaines phrases ne me semble pas correct, j’ai donc mis l’idée générale entre parenthèses.

Merci d’avance

5. She was an eye-witness to what happened. Justify

She was an eye-witness because when the door opened, she looked through the window and she saw the visitor. And elsewhere she could draw the man’s photo of him.

( d’ailleurs elle serait sûrement capable de dessiner le portrait robot de cette personne)

6.

What made understand that something unusual was taking place ?

je ne suis pas sure d’avoir compris tout le sens du texte qui se rapporte à cette question, le voici :

« that surprised her, someone coming to their house and being angry, shouting at her mother »

Ma réponse : She understood that something unusual was happening when she heard A man’s voice which sounded very angry. Indeed, she was surprised that someone came to her house being angry and more who shot her mother. ( et en plus qui frappe sa mère )

9.

She was happy that someone came and rang at the door. Justify

en fait je ne pense pas avoir compris entièrement le passage du texte qui se rapporte à cette question, le voici :

« Instead, someone rang the doorbell. They weren’t expecting anyone and that made it more exiting because a visitor calling, a neighbour, a friend, would almost certainly result in her being fetched downstairs”

Ma réponse: Yes, she was happy that someone came and rang at the door because anyone was waiting, and it was exiting for Francine. Indeed, if someone came from their house she would bring in a ground floor)