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[lauraprincesse]

Bonjour, j'ai un devoir a faire concernant des films du 21 eme siècle, le notre donc( de siècle lol!). Pourriez vous m'aider et regarder si il y a des erreurs s'il vous plaît ? Ça serait super sympa

We have conducted a Survey on the most popular films of the 21st century so far. We found that the best plot was pulp fiction because it is a mixture of several stories. At the end, all of these little stories intermingle. That's made the movie very unusual And exciting!

Then, we think the best setting was Avatar, it's an animation movie with spectacular landscapes. The 3D animations are realistic but imaginary at the same Time. In my point of view, it is a masterpiece of the 21st century with all it's technological advances.

To finish, our favorite actor is Samuel L Jackson for his role on several outstanding movies like pulp fiction, Jackie Brown, And the avengers. Next, the best actress is the Well-known Meryl Streep who has played on the Devil wears Prada, a comedy film, where Meryl take the role of a sadical boss working on fashion.

Merci pour votre aide d'avance !

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

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[lauraprincesse]

Merci beaucoup ça va beaucoup m'aider !