Correction de texte.

[dreamthelife]

Bonjour, j'ai un texte à faire en anglais sur le réveillon de noël, j'aimerais que l'on me corrige mon texte merci d'avance.

I did Christmas Eve with my family, it was in my cousin. I helped to complete the preparations before that begin the evening. The guests arrived, we were twenty persons. Once everyone were there we could begin the appetizers where everyone talked. It was friendly. In the evening, my cousin and me we were bored and we decided to go to play to the wii for do to spend the time, we play to just dance. It was fun. Then with my cousin we went to do some photos. Once the lunch has passed, struck midnight et the Santa Claus passed. The children were happy and intimidated. To two hours we come back to my home and a lot of present we had waited in front the fir. At Christmas, I had money, a new phone, a parfum, and some chocolates and I very happy of my Christmas.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Sans vouloir te vexer ni te décourager, tu devrais apprendre un minimum d'anglais avant d'oser présenter un texte truffé de fautes aux yeux de tout le monde.