Correction d'un dialogue

[lauranna]

Bonjour,

J'ai un oral d'anglais et donc j'ai ecrit un dialogue entre un journaliste et une célébrité serait-il possible de me le corriger car j'ai bien l'impression que mon texte est plein de fautes. De plus mon amie n'as rien fait de tout le week-end alors qu'on devait le faire a deux.

Merci d'avance

Anaelle : Journaliste

Sarah : Ashley BENSON

Anaelle : I’m so happy because you open to the fox the doors of your house Ashley Benson ! How are you today ?

Sarah : I’m fine thank you Vee sky. I’m happy to welcome you to my home.

Anaelle : your leading role of Hanna Marin in the serie pretty little liars who made you famous. Has it extended your career ?

Sarah : This role allowed me to be selected in the new Dior advertisement !

Anaelle : Oh really !? That a good news for you. So Dior will be publishing a new ad ?

Sarah: It’s a ad for their new fragrance “hypnotic poison” and it will be related just before Christmas.

Anaelle : Now we are exited ! Can we have some informations about this advert ? please Ashley

Sarah : Of course it’s not a secret ! I will be on the screen with Drew Van Acker the fantastic model and actor who play “Jason DiLaurentis” on pretty little liars and at the end he will kiss me. And we going to shoot this advertisement on a desertic beach and tropical wood in Hawaii.

Anaelle: This place make me dream ! Why they choose Drew to play with you ?

Sarah : Drew is a sexy actor so it’s a good think for Dior to take a man envy by all the world.

Anaelle : You’re really lucky ! I suppose that all the women who will watch you are jealous ! As you say Drew Van Acker is really attractive. This ad could it bring you ?

Sarah : Me and Drew !? No ! I say he is sexy but he is just a good friend. And don’t forget my boyfriend is Julian Morris: the doctor Wren Kingston in the serie !

Anaelle : Thank you for this interview Ashley, now I leave you : do you want to say some words for finish ?

Sarah : I want to say thank you to the sponsor of this ad and to all my fan for monitoring ! Bye

Anaelle : And now back to the studio !

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

  lauranna a dit :

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Sarah : I’m fine thank you Vee sky.<??? I’m happy to welcome you to my home. <Qu'és aco ?

Anaelle : your leading role of Hanna Marin in the series Pretty little liars who made you famous. Has it extended your career?

Sarah : This role allowed me to be selected in the new Dior advertisement!

Anaelle : Oh really !? That a This is good news for you. So Dior will be publishing a new ad?

Sarah: It’s an ad for their new fragrance “hypnotic poison” and it will be related released just before Christmas.

Anaelle : Now we are excited ! Can we have some informations about this advert, please Ashley?

Sarah : Of course it’s not a no secret ! I will be on the screen with Drew Van Acker the fantastic model and actor who plays “Jason DiLaurentis” in Pretty little liars and at the end he will kiss me. And we're going to shoot this advertisement on a desertic beach and tropical wood in Hawaii. -s final au présent simple d'un verbe dont le sujet est singulier. Tu l'as appris en Sixième et c'est toujours valable aujourd'hui. Mémorise-le une bonne fois car si tu ne l'écris pas, tu ne le prononceras pas et ton professeur le remarquera.

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Sarah : Me and Drew!? No! I say he is sexy but he is just a good friend. And remember / don’t forget my boyfriend is Julian Morris: the doctor Wren Kingston in the series!

Anaelle : Thank you for this interview Ashley, now I leave you : do you want would you like to say some a few last words for finish?

Sarah : I want to say thank you to the sponsor of this ad and to all my fans for monitoring! Bye

Anaelle : And now back to the studio!

[lauranna]

Merci beaucoup.

Et au fait "vee sky" ce n'est pas une erreur, c'est le nom que mon amie a choisit. Je lui ai dit que ce nom était vraiment horrible (en effet ! ) mais elle veut pas m'écoutéer.