Pouvez-vous Corriger Mes Fautes S'il Vous Plaît...

[TKishBoy78]

Voici la traduction en gras je voudrais que vous regardiez si j'ai fais des fautes et me dire où s'il vous plaît merci

Ce document est une photographie.

Je pense qu'elle a été prise au Mexique.

La photo rassemble des humains, un environnement et une partie du ciel.

Si je peux donner ma propre opinion sur cette photo, je voudrais dire que les gens regardent tous vers cette lumière. Cette lumière qui est jaune et orange a l'air d'être fétiche et magique mais je pense que c'est les rayons dégagés par le soleil. Je suppose que le photographe essaye d'attirer l'attention sur cette lumière brillante au fond.

Au premier plan, nous pouvons voir un enfant assis avec un sac et trois autres enfants près de lui qui apparemment ne fais que d’observer ceux qui se passent. Je peux supposer que se soit des Nomades. Au milieu et à gauche, il y a des gens assis et debout qui sont dispersés un peu partout. Une partie de ces gens sont placés en forme triangulaire.

Au fond, nous pouvons voir le paysage qui est constitué de collines.

On distingue que le sol est composé de cailloux et qu'il est sec

La couleur de la terre est orange et marron.

Les gens ont l'air pauvre et épuisé. On peut même apercevoir un vieux qui ne fait que marcher tout seul.

Peut être que ces enfants ne vont pas à l'école et qu'ils travaillent comme les adultes pour aider leurs familles à se nourrir.

Pour conclure, je peux dire que les gens se dirigent vers les collines vont peut être trouver espoirs derrière ces collines. D’une part de l’eau car apparemment sur la photographie il n’apparaît aucune bouteille d’eau ou un endroit d’eau. Et d’autre part de la nourriture car les gens sont tellement fatigués qu’ils ne mangent pas.

This document is a photograph.

I think that It was taken in Mexico.

The photograph collects people, a environment and a part of sky.

If I can give my own opinion about that photograph, I would say that all people look over this light. This light which is yellow and orange colored seems to be a fetish and magic but I think that's beams loosened by the sun. I suppose that the photographer tries to attract our attention on this brilliant light at the bottom. In the foreground, we can see a child who is sitting with a bag and three other children near him who apparently have just observed those who take place. I suppose they're Nomads. In the middle and to the left, there are sitting and standing, people who are almost everywhere scattered. A part of these people are placed in a triangular shape. At the bottom, we can see the landscape which is constituted by hills.

We notice that the ground consists of pebbles and that it's dry.

The color of the ground is orange and brown. People look poor and sight. We can even perceive an old man who is walking alone.

Maybe these children don't go to school and work as the adults do to help their families to feed.

To conclude, I can say that people go to hills to find hopes behind them hills. On one hand some water because apparently on the photograph it appears no bottle of water or a place of water. And on the other hand of the food because people are so tired that they don't eat.

[kamikakushi]

This document is a photograph.

I think that It has been taken in Mexico.

The photograph gets together people, an environment and a part of sky.

If I can give my own opinion about that photograph, I would say that all people look over this light. This light which is yellow and orange colored seems to be a fetish and magic but I think that are beams loosened by the sun. I suppose that the photographer tries to attract our attention on this brilliant light at the bottom. In the foreground, we can see a child who is sitting with a bag and three other children near him who apparently have just observed what is happening. I suppose they're Nomads. In the middle and to the left, there are sitting and standing, people who are almost scattered all over the place. A part of these people are sat in a triangular shape. At the bottom, we can see the landscape which is constituted by hills.

We notice that the ground consists of rocks and that it's dry.

The color of the ground is orange and brown. People look poor and sight. We can even perceive an old man who is walking alone.

Maybe these children don't go to school and work as the adults do to help their families to feed.

To conclude, I can say that people go to hills to find hopes behind these hills. On the one hand some water because apparently on the photograph it appears no bottle of water or a place of water. And on the other hand of the food because people are so tired that they don't eat.

Voilà, j'ai corrigé quelques fautes, il doit sûrement en subsister mais il y en a moins .