dialogue

[lucasdu66]

bonjour, pouvez-vous nous aider (car nous sommes 2) pour notre dialogue en anglais ?

sujet 1 : Tu téléphones à un employeur pour un job d'été.

sujet 2 : 2 amis qui parlent de leur week-end (ce qu'ils ont fait, vu, entendu, concerts, fêtes, activités sportives, match de foot, etc...)

sujet 3 : 2 amis qui parlent de leurs projets (week-end, vacances, orientation, étudees, sorties, concerts).

nous devons tenir au minimum une minute.

merci d'avance pour vos réponses.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Ce forum, pas plus que celui sur lequel tu as posté la même demande, n'est un distributeur automatique de réponses toutes faites.

Aucune aide ne vous sera apportée à toi et ton camarade tant que vous ne proposerez pas le résultat de votre travail personnel.

Voici néanmoins deux fiches utiles vues sur anglaisfacile.com :

http://www.anglaisfacile.com/free/voc/telephoner.php

http://www.anglaisfacile.com/pages/mie/0dialogue.php

Donnez-vous la peine de chercher d'autres renseignement utiles en interrogeant google.

[lucasdu66]

voici ce que j'ai fait pour ma part (parce que mon camarade n'a pas fini) :

Hello,...?

How are you ?

I'm ok

Did you have a nice holiday ?

Why?

I did a nice holiday too.

First day, I went to the cinema with my brother and my sister. After, we went to the swimming pool. First week, on Saturday, I went to Disneyland in Paris with my familie. It was great because we saw Mickey and Donald. My heroes when I was little. We took pictures together. Then, me and my famile walked in Paris and we went shopping. I bought lots of clothes. It was expensive but it wasn't important. On Sunday, I slept a lot because I was very tired. The first week was very fast spent.

During the second week end of the holidays, I did my homework. And during the first three days, I have my exercices of French and Maths. I also prepared my art history. The next three days, I learned my lessons of English, German and Geography.

Ici j'ai mis que mes répliques car mon camarade n'a pas fini.

J'ai raconté mes vacances. (je vais demandé à mon professeur si je peux faire les vacances).

merci d'avance pour vos réponses.

[Jean B]

Bonsoir,

Même s'il est destiné à l'oral, prends l'habitude de mettre le dialogue entre guillemets.

Note également que le point d'interrogation se colle SANS espace derrière le dernier mot.

Pour gagner de la place, j'ai supprimé tout ce qui est correct.

[...//...]

I'm OK <s'écrit avec 2 majuscules

[...//...]

I did had a nice holiday too.

The first day, I went to the cinema with my brother and my sister. [...//...]The first week, on Saturday, I went to Disneyland in Paris with my family. It was great because we saw Mickey and Donald, my heroes when I was a little boy. [...//...]Then, me and my family walked in Paris and we went shopping.[...//...]The first week was went by very fast spent.

[...//...]And during the first three days, I have did my French and maths exercises of French and Maths. [...//...] The next three days, I learned my lessons of English, German and Geography lessons.

[lucasdu66]

voici les répliques de mon camarade:

-hi

-I am fine thanks . What about you ?

-yes i did

-and you ?

What did you during your week-end ?

-first i went to luxury hotel for one week during the week on the hotel. I played video games and every day

I went to the turkish bath.There was buffet all the tile new dishes and there was a cinema on the hotel. I went to the seaside and trip with the luxury and fast boat but I went to the swimming pool because there was repair . There was a luxury bar.

-The second week I went to my family and every day I played with my cousin and climbed walked to the downtown

Merci

pardon la fin c'est

Me and my family walked to the downtown.

voici ce qu'est j'ai mis à la fin pour conclure :

Here is how it is to unwind my holidays (voici comment s'est dérouler mes vacances)

[Jean B]

I faudra transmettre toutes mes notes à ton camarade pour qu'il en prenne de la graine car je ne vais pas répéter ici les mêmes remarques.

En conséquence, je vais me borner à baliser les erreurs en rouge, à partir de quoi vous n'aurez qu'à en trouver la cause pour les corriger. De plus, selon mon code de balisage, xx signale une omission. À vous de trouver laquelle.

-hi

-I am fine thanks . What about you ?

-yes i did

-and you ?

What did you during your week-end ?

-first i went to xx luxury hotel for one week during the week on the hotel. I played video games and every day

I went to the turkish bath.There was xx buffet all the tile new dishes and there was a cinema on the hotel. I went to the seaside and xx trip with the luxury and fast boat but I went to the swimming pool because there was repair. There was a luxury bar.

-The second week I went to xx my family and every day I played with my cousin. Me and my family walked to the downtown