Aide pour correction d'un texte

[Jinna]

Bonjour,

Je dois raconter l'histoire d'un géant que l'on a étudié en classe. Ce texte doit être écrit au passé et j'ai beaucoup de mal à conjuguais les verbes en Anglais et aussi en Français :/. Donc j'aimerais savoir si j'ai fait beaucoup de faute et si mon texte est compréhensible :

Once upon a time, there was a giant who name is Karl. At night, during the townsfolk slept, Karl ravages the gardens in search of food. In the morning, the townsfolk find whole cornfields ravaged. No one knew what to do. This pillaging went on for some time, until one day half a dozen dogs came up missing. The narrator's father came up with a plan. It was dangerous, but there seemed to be nothing else to do. One fine summer morning, the narrator's father set out on his way and he headed for the mountains, where he knew of a cave of Karl. He asked Karl to sacrifice so that the giant doesn't ravage not the village. They make a deal and after that, the giant won't be hungry and he will stop eating corn and dogs. Karl lives now in the town but the town is too small for the giant, he must go and eat in a big city. Now, Karl is clean and short clean hair and he is sociable while before he was alone, dirty and long dirty hair. The narrator’s father propose to leave the town with the giant go to a big city where the giant will find food. Edward is ambition he probably wants a career; in a big city he will find more opportunities. They arrive at a crossroads and Edward makes a suggestion. He proposes to take the new road while the giant takes the old road. He proposes they meet at the end and Edward gives Karl his backpack because he wants the giant to trust him and as proof of his sincerity.

Once in the big city, they lived happily ever after.

Merci d'avance pour votre aide !!

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Je dois raconter l'histoire d'un géant que l'on a étudié en classe. Ce texte doit être écrit au passé et j'ai beaucoup de mal à conjuguaiser les verbes en anglais et aussi en français :/.

[Jinna]

Merci beaucoup!

''He asked Karl to sacrifice <??? so that the giant doesn't ravage not the village.'' J'ai oublié une phrase ''The narrator's father decides to sacrifice himself, he wants the giant to eat him for the giant doesn't ravage the village. '' .

Edward j'ai oublié de le mettre entre parenthèses que c'est le père du narrateur.

Et merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidée!

[Jean B]

Merci beaucoup!

''He asked Karl to sacrifice <??? so that the giant doesn't ravage not the village.'' J'ai oublié une phrase ''The narrator's father decided to sacrifice himself, he wanted the giant to eat him for so that the giant doesn't shouldn't ravage the village. '' .

Edward j'ai oublié de le mettre entre parenthèses que c'est le père du narrateur.

Et merci beaucoup de m'avoir aidée !

[Jinna]

Oups, oui en effet, j'ai du mal ...