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[myrianis3]

Bonjour, j'ai un important texte écrit à remettre, le thème étant : raconter un film sentimental en anglais en donnant son avis. Merci pour toute éventuelle correction

Yesterday, I saw on TV one of my favourite movies: Ghost, with Patrick Swayze and Demi Moore. I found it very moving and sentimental, and it made me think. Is there something after the dead? We often forget that our life is hanging by a thread. This movie reminds that it’s really important to say “I love you” to people we love, because sometimes it’s too late.

Ghost it’s the story of a couple, Sam and Molly, who are moving in a old and beautiful flat. They are very happy together. Molly makes pottery and Sam works in a bank, and he has a lot of money. One day, they are coming back to the theatre when a thief arises, claims their money but finally, he kills Sam and fled. Sam is henceforth a ghost and he realises that his death wasn’t an accident. In fact, he discovers that it’s his best friend, Carl, who paid someone to kill him to take over his money. Sam understands that Molly is threatened, and he tries to warn her, but he can’t. Fortunately, he meets another ghost who teaches him to touch and move objects like a living person. After that, he meets a woman, Oda, who can listen to him. The fortune teller is surprised to discover that she really has the gift. Sam convinces her to help him and together, they empty the Sam’s account before that Carl does that. They make a donation with the money to a charity. But now, Molly is really in danger because Carl thinks that she knows where is the money. Sam and Oda succeed to warn Molly and come round to her place just before Carl arrives. He tries to catch Molly and Oda, but Sam prevents it and eventually, Carl died and is carried by the dark.

s'emparer = to take over his money c'est correct ?

[Jean B]

bONJOUR?

  Le 26/02/2012 à 14:01, myrianis3 a dit :

Bonjour, j'ai un important texte écrit à remettre, le thème étant : raconter un film sentimental en anglais en donnant son avis. Merci pour toute éventuelle correction

Yesterday, I saw watched on TV