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[Ninh]

Bonjour,

j'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes dans se texte essensiellement au niveau du sens ou de la conjugaison car je ne comprend pas vraiment quand employer le simple past , present perfect ....

Merci .

When I was a child ,I was really a daredevil, however 3 years ago this daredevil life stop, let me explain why :

3 years ago, in winter I went to the north of Italia for do ski .It was a beautiful day, I did sky without any problem and the weather was good and when my father sayd that we will gone at a black ski run , I was okay. I have already done some Black ski run that's why i wasn't afraid. I did ski 1 hours and i'd take back the cable car for gone in a more difficult and height black ski run. When I arrived the weather wasn't good, there was a snow storm but I was oblige to go down now. We was alone. I was tired, I have would finish it quickly but all the landscape was white , I have saw nothing just white all was white however I have decided to go more and more speed therefore I fall.

I remember this wasen't a simple fall because I was at a high-speed. My father say that it was like an avalanche and for me too. I can stop me and I loose my ski ,all was so speed and I've get intot the few people there was. I was not so afraid of the fall but I was afraid of the ravine. By chance I stoped few meters before the ravine.

That's why now I more careful and that's why also I didn't would go of a black ski run now.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

  Le 25/02/2012 à 20:12, Ninh a dit :

Bonjour,

J'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes dans se ce texte essentiellement au niveau du sens ou de la conjugaison car je ne comprends pas vraiment quand employer le simple past, present perfect ....

Merci .

When I was a child, I was really a daredevil. However, 3 years ago this daredevil life stopped, let me explain why :