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[Nouchkaa]

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Today, with the development of important new technologies, more and more people are turning to internet to find the ideal soul mate. Many dating sites have been created, including Meetic. This site includes more than 500,000 persons.

Man or woman and of any age, many people are on dating sites. This allowed some people to find the ideal person. According to Meetic, their site has enabled a million people to get in couple. It is an easy means to meet many persons, find people who are interested in the same things as us, to discuss easily with them.

But, attention these sites can become dangerous. Indeed, we talk to people behind a computer screen, We don't really know whom we address. We can have of unpleasant surprises, especially if we decide to meet someone in real life. Nowadays, it is certainly a very used method which can lead to a great story, but it is necessary to remain very suspicious.

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[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour tout le monde !

Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger mon texte ?

Today, with the development of important new technologies, more and more people are turning to (the) Internet to find the ideal soul mate. Many dating sites have been created, including Meetic. This site includes more than 500,000 persons.

Man or woman and of any age, many people are on dating sites. This allowed some people to find the ideal person. According to Meetic, their site has enabled a million people to get in couple. It is an easy means to meet many persons, find people who are interested in the same things as us we are, to discuss easily with them.

But, attention beware / be careful / these sites can become dangerous.