Aide pour correction d'une dissertation

[hellow]

Bonjour,

il me faudrait un peu d'aide pour une dissertation sur le thème du clonage donc si vous pouviez jeter un coup d'oeil sur ce que j'ai écrit et me dire si cela a du sens ( et au passage me corriger les grosses fautes ) ce serais super sympa.

Voilà ma dissertation:

For years and years, the cloning of living beings has just been an aspect of science fiction.When the first clone was created,people realized that this breakthrough could be a door to unimaginable technology, not necessarily positive.

Certainly, some people do not hide their desire to be cloned and their motivations are multiple. Some people reached by infertility would that the child stemming from in vitro fertilization is genetically bound to them. Others else see in a clone of their person, a reserve of cells or organs in case of diseases or accident. However, the cloning raises ethical problems as far as the clone is often considered as an object for experiments.

So, we can wonder if the cloning is a good invention. Indeed, it would be possible to produce plants threatened in the nature and so to save the espece. But, what about the human cloning? The individual cloned could he live a normal life ? It is true that the cloning is a big biological exploit but its use remains to define.

In conclusion, the invention of the cloning is not a good or bad things because it depend in the way we are going to use it. However it puts huge ethical problems and also provokes legal difficulties concerning the legal status of the clone.

Je vous remercie

[laura62]

Bonjour voila je te repond

For years and years, the cloning of living beings has just been an aspect of science fiction.When the first clone was created,people realised that this breakthrough could be a door to unimaginable technology, not necessarily positive.

Certainly, some people didn't hide their desire were cloned and their motivations are multiple. Some people reached by infertility would that the child stemming from in vitro fertilization is genetically bound to them. Others else see in a clone of their person, a reserve of cells or organs in case of diseases or accident. However, the cloning raises ethicals problems as far as the clone is often considered as an object for experiments.

So, we can wonder if the cloning is a good invention. Indeed, it would be possible to produce plants threatened in the nature and so to save the espece. But, what about the human cloning? The individual cloned could he live a normal life ? It is true that the cloning is a big biological exploit but its use remains to define.

In conclusion, the invention of the cloning is not a good or bad things because it depend in the way we are going to use it. However it puts huge ethical problems and also provokes legal difficulties concerning the legal status of the clone.