Description d'une image en anglais

[san-san]

Bonjour,

Décrire et interpréter l'image ci-dessous en un peu près 6 lignes.

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In the picture there is a man, in his house, who sits in an armchair and holds a diary in his hands. He speaks with his son and tells him that he and his mother found out he have been blogging. They don't know what that means, but they would like him to stop. They don't know what that means a blog, it is normal because it is modern, them are of the precent generation, so they would like that their son to stop. There is a gap of generation beetween the parents and their son.

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[yveslouis]

Bonjour,

Décrire et interpréter l'image ci-dessous en un peu près 6 lignes.

Voici mon texte :

In the picture there is a man, in his house, who sits (pour décrire une image, emploie plutôt le present "Be+ing") in an armchair and holds (idem) a diary (news)paper in his hands. He speaks with his son and tells him that he and his mother wife have found out he have their son has been blogging. They don't know what that means, but they would like him to stop. They don't know what that blogging means a blog, it is normal/natural because it is modern, them are of and they belong to the precent previous generation, so they would like that (faute à éviter absolument !) their son to stop. There is a gap of generation beetween the parents and their son.

Pouvez vous corriger mon texte s'il vous plait. Merci.