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[ptite_crevette]

Bonjour!!

J'aurai voulu savoir si mes phrases était correcte et, si l'on pouvait m'aider aussi a enchainer les différent paragraphes avec les mots de liaisons! Je vous remercie beaucoup!!!!!!

Australia is a federal states of Oceania. It is a member of the commonwealth. It located in south tern hemisphere, between ocean indian and east Pacific. It count sseventeen million two hundred thousand eigh hundred inhabitants (17 210 800) for seven million seven hundred thousand of kilometers square (7 700 00). The capital is Canberra.

The political regime is a parlementary democratie. The majotary religion is the protestants with 73% of the population, after them it is the Christians.

Australia is a country of plains and plateau, it formed in the west of a vast plateau, in the center, of plains, and, in the east of a mountainous chains, the highest mountains culminate at two thousand two hundred twenty eigh meter.

The climate is hot, Australia suffer of a strong arridy, and of many desert.

Geography

Australia is a agricultural country until it (connaît) an industrial development, 14% of the working population is employed in the agriculture. The agriculture is a bovine breeding but especially ovin breeding. Australia détains the fourth world production of barley, the australian ground has got many ressources. Moreover of the agriculture and the breeding, many industries has been developed : the chesmistry and the metallurgy. These last yeras, the poroduction of the natural gas has been develop.

History

Discover by the dutch, the continent was colonised by the English after a trip of Cook in 1770. The territory was organised by governors , Macquarie end Brisbare. In 1851, it’s the discovery of gold. IN 1901, Oceania became e federation of six autonomas states. Australia was an important country to help the Allies during the second world war. In 1970, white people acceptet certain condition for black people.

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Australia is a federal STATE of Oceania. It is a member of the Commonwealth. It IS located in THE SOUTHERN hemisphere, between THE INDIAN OCEAN and THE THE EAST Pacific OCEAN. It COUNTS seventeen million two hundred thousand eigh hundred inhabitants (17 210 800) for seven million seven hundred thousand SQUARE KILOMETERS (7 700 00). The capital is Canberra.

The political regime is a parlementary DEMOCRACY. The majoRItary religion is PROTESTANTISM with 73% of PROTESTANTS AMONG THE POPULATION, AND JUST BEHIND them ARE the Christians.

Australia is a country of plains and PLATEAUS, it IS formed in the west of a vast plateau, in the center, of plains, and, in the east of a mountainous CHAIN, the highest mountains culminate at two thousand two hundred AND twenty-EIGHT meter.

The climate is hot, Australia suffer FROM STRONG ARIDITY, and HAS many DESERTS.

Geography

Australia is AN agricultural country until it MEETS an industrial development, 14% of the working population ARE employed in the agriculture. The agriculture is a bovine breeding but especially SHEEP breeding. Australia DETAINS the fourth world production of barley, the Australian ground has got many RESOURCES. ON TOP OF AGRICULTURE AND BREEDING, many industries HAVE been developed SUCH AS CHEMISTRY and METALLURGY. These PREVIOUS YEARS, the PRODUCTION of NATURAL GAS has been DEVELOPED.

History

DISCOVERED by the Dutch, the continent was colonised by the English after a trip of Cook in 1770. The territory was organised by THE governors Macquarie end Brisbare. In 1851, GOLD WAS DISCOVERED. IN 1901, Oceania became A federation of six AUTONOMOUS states. Australia was an important country IN HELPING the Allies during the Second World War. In 1970, white people ACCEPTED certain CONDITIONS for THE black people.

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