Expression Écrite Avec Mon Vocabulaire

[Su Princess]

Bonjour

Je suis en 1er avec LV1 anglais, et j'ai fait une expression écrite toute seule! Avec mon vocabulaire.

Je voudrais savoir si mon vocabulaire choisit est correct.

Pourriez vous m'aider, s'il vous plait?

I like visit New York, its city more extraordinary of world. Over there, it’s liberty and there are all everything you dream of having all new look. There are many boutique and I like ambience to the city, restaurants very animated, streets are full, the days as the night whit its lights who anime the city. I like The Statue of The Liberty, who is good high and good placed. It’s very symbol to the American power. I like New York because its city when I feel liberty and I’m goes after spends my summer holidays over there.

Merci.

[Jean B]

Bonjour,

Bonjour,

Je suis en 1er avec LV1 anglais, et j'ai fait une expression écrite toute seule ! Avec mon vocabulaire.

Je voudrais savoir si mon vocabulaire choisi est correct.

Pourriez-vous m'aider, s'il vous plait ?

I like to visit New York, it is the most extraordinary city of in the world. Over there, it's liberty freedom and there are is all everything you dream of having. all new look. There are many boutique shops and I like ambience to the city atmosphere with its very lively / busy restaurants very animated, its crowded streets which are full of lights the in day time just as the by night whit its lights who anime the city. I like the Statue of The Liberty who which is good rather high tall and good well placed. It's the very symbol to of the American power. I like New York because it's a city when where I feel liberty free and I'm goes will after spend my summer holidays over there.

Merci.

[Su Princess]

Ah merci beaucoup JBR

Mais je voudrais au moins savoir pourquoi je ne peux pas mettre liberty? Et à la place free?

Et pourquoi je ne peux pas mettre good? Et à la place rather?

Avant ça, j'avais fait une autre expression et mon amie m'a dit que tout était correct: Marilyn Monroe is an American actress and a singer. She lived in Los Angeles and she wanted to become a model but she ended to be a very successful actress and she was a star. She played in “Some like it hot”, in this film she sang a very famous song “I wanna be loved by you” and played of film. But her private life was chaotic, she suicide in 1962, but some people say that she has been has murdered. She is a sex symbol and I like her because she is timeless feminine icon.

Et j'ai tout bien conjugué, j'ai bien choisi mon vocabulaire.

Mais dans celui là, pourquoi je dois mettre shops à la place de boutique? Comment faites-vous pour choisir le bon vocabulaire?

Encore merci.