Expression Écrite : Two Topics

[Su Princess]

Hello

I does two writes expressions to 150 words.

Can you correct me please?

My best novel

My best novel is "Le Club des baby siters". I'm very like this novel because there are many tomes and also always a new story to read. Another, in this novel there are three story and whenever change. There are seven girls that organize a club and that speak ofdifferent steps and program to realize. In one tome, three of this baby siters tell one story each. On one side, hers daily life and hers hobbys, then another side hers days with kids to differents ages. This novel is very instructive. It apprene to master the French and to good conjuge verbs. Also, this novel we apprene many thinfs as know manage toll responsability, become an adult of deal kids. We discorver everything woes and joys to the life. First, i'm findet this novel when I was in fifth. I'm went in the library (bibliothèque) of my quartier and i has findet. Than I was advise of my sisters and since we love this roman.

The best friend

The best friend is very important in the life, it's impossible to live alone because it's sow. Habing a best friend means many things and we bring always the new. We can change our objets or organised weekends to fun, have a good time. We can studies together, it's funny and it's encouraging to do at two this homerwor than alone. With a best friend in the life, we can have moment hard when he been there to you support and you remonte the moral. Or to change and take good adives. We recognizes when his best friend is in difficult time and it's there to support you and when you need his and he open his arms.

Tank you in advance

[yveslouis]

Hello

I does did two writes writing expressions to of 150 words.

Can you correct me, please?

My best novel

My best novel is "Le Club des baby-sitters".

I'm very like this novel very much because there are many tomes volumes and also always a new story to read.

Another Moreover, in this these novels there are three story stories and whenever change it's always different (?).

There are seven girls that/who organize a club and that/who speak of different steps (???) and programmes to realize.

In one tome volume, three of this these baby-sitters tell one story each.

On one side, hers their daily life and hers their hobbies, then on another side, hers their days with kids to of differents ages.

This novel is very instructive.

It apprene teaches how to master the French and how to good conjugate verbs well.

Also Besides, this novel we apprene teaches us many things as know manage like managing toll(???) responsibility, becoming an adult of and deal with kids.

We discorver everything: the woes and joys to the of life.

First, i'm findet I first found this novel when I was in fifth second form.

I'm went in to the library (bibliothèque) of my quartier in the neighbourhood and I has findet found it.

Then I was advise of my sisters advised me and since then we have loved this roman these novels.

[Su Princess]

Merci beaucoup yveslouis