Maxou62 Posté(e) le 6 février 2011 Signaler Posté(e) le 6 février 2011 Bonsoir, Voila j'ai un sujet de rédaction qui consiste à écrire un échange de mail en rapport avec le site couchsurfing. Je voudrais savoir si vous pouvez me corriger mes fautes, svp. Sujet : You are about to host a couchsurfer for a week. You send him an email to make sure everything is all right and ask him/her questions about his/her habits; likes and dislikes; … He/She answers your questions and wants to get more information on the place, food, etc… Hello Jason, How are you ? The day comes. I am the couchsurfer which welcome you and I would like to know if you are always all right so that I accommodate you at my home, the next week? I have already prepared the sofa and I am an impatient person to receive you. Hello Alex, I am on form and I am always all right so that you accommodate at your home. I am impatient to visit your region. But have you animals? What are your French specialties? Could you do to visit him your city please? Hi Jason! I have a dog and a cat which are very kind. Do you like? Our French specialities are the cheese and the wine, in particular in my region, the speciality is the Maroilles cheese which is a cheese which smells strong. As I do not work this week, I could show you my region. So you will see of beautiful landscape. Hi Alex! Yes, I like animals but I am the allergy but it's not serious. I know a little the maroilles because my friend has been in French last years. It was excellent! My hobby is the photo and I like the landscapes. j'ai mis le principal, pour les formules de politesse et autres, j'ai des exemples. Je vous remercie .
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