Jojo Bonavita Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Je dois rendre cette lettre vendredi, alors si vous pouviez la corriger le plus vite possible...Je vous remercie par avnce de votre diligence. Voici la bête... Mr or Mrs, As all the students who have seen "L'auberge espagnol", this movie has made me want to go studyingone year abroad. Personnaly, I'm interested in United Kingdom. My field of study encouraging these initiatives, I putpen to paper to write this letter which, I hope so, will show my great motivation. Of course, Cedric Klapish's film isn't the main reason which drives me to fill in this file. Indeed, I'd like to specialize in tourism. It requires a perfect english. But above all, a one year time studies in a foreign country represents a fantastic experience. One year far from our home, our family, our friend and our usual marks will give us and learn to us self-sufficency."Abandoned" abroad, our responsabilities will be most important and rewarding. Moreover, this new kind of life will bring us the maturity and the sense of responsabilities necessary to a future job. Yet, the life in Great Britain will be totally different. So the "cultural shock" can be feared. But I'm sure that I'll be able to overcome it. Indeed, I've already been in Ireland (2 wweks) and in England (3 weeks). During this trip, I've stayed at the inhabitants'. So I've spent many time with them. Notably, I keep a great memory of Ireland; a magnificent country and a so nice, open and interesting people. Moreover, I'm rather sociable. Then I'm sure that I won't know difficulties to integrate the student community. What really scares me is probably the famous english cooking and their so disappointing victory in the rugby world cup 2003. I hope my letter to express my extreme motivation.
afreemind Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 salut,alors voyons voir,je t'ai corrigé ça Mr or Mrs, As all the students who have seen "L'auberge espagnol", this movie has made me want to go and study for a year abroad. Personally, I'm interested in the United Kingdom. (alors ici je ne suis pas trop sur de ce que tu as voulu dire,mais ta phrase me semble bizarre,si tu pouvais m'apporter des précisions!!)My field of study encouraging these initiatives, I putpen to paper to write this letter which, I hope so, will show my great motivation. Of course, Cedric Klapish's film isn't the main reason which drives me to fill in this file. Indeed, I'd like to specialize myself in tourism later. It requires a perfect english. But above all, one year studying in a foreign country represents a fantastic experience. One year far from our home, our family, our friends and our usual marks will give us and teach us self-sufficency."Abandoned" abroad, our responsabilities will be more important and rewarding. Moreover, this new kind of life will bring us the maturity and the sense of responsabilities necessary to a future job. Yet, the life in Great Britain will be totally different. So the "cultural shock" can be feared. But I'm sure that I'll be able to overcome it. Indeed, I've already been to Ireland (2 weeks) and to England (3 weeks). During these trips, I stayed with the inhabitants. So I've spent a lot of time with native people from these countries. Notably, I keep a great memory of Ireland; a magnificent country and so nice, open and interesting people. Moreover, I'm rather sociable. So I'm sure that I won't find any difficulties in integrating the student community. What really scares me is probably the famous english cooking and their so disappointing victory in the rugby world cup 2003. I hope my letter expresses my extreme motivation
kamikakushi Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 L'auberge esapgnolE !, je sais, je suis tatillon lol D'ailleurs, j'ai adoré ce film (il est dans mon top 10 lol), est-ce que vous connaitriez un film du même genre ?
afreemind Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 sinon t'as pas trouver d'autres fautes que j'aurais omis de corriger?lol
kamikakushi Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 Signaler Posté(e) le 3 décembre 2003 euh, à première vue tout va bien je ferais ptete une seconde vue plus tard lol.
Jojo Bonavita Posté(e) le 4 décembre 2003 Auteur Signaler Posté(e) le 4 décembre 2003 En fait, dans la phrase qui ne veux pas dire grand chose, j'ai voulu traduire : ma filière encourageant ces initiatives, je prends la plume pour ecrire cette lettre qui, je l'espère, montrera ma grande motivation. Je crois que je vais la refaire, sauf si vous pensez pouvoir la traduire d'une façon plus académique
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