Lettre En Anglais

[mathou59]

Bonjour , j'ai un devoir d'anglais , où il faut raconter son voyage à New-York avec ses parents, à sa meilleure amie . Je ne suis pas très forte en Anglais , donc si vous voyez des fautes .. merci d'avance !

Dearest Ashley ,

How are you ? My holidays in New-York are fantastic ! New-York is a beautiful city , and I visited many monuments. I have been at the Brooklyn Bridge, ine the statue of liberty , but I really liked the Empire State Building ! My mother has vertigo , so I went with my father , it was fabulous ! It is really high !

Yesterday, I was shopping with my mother in the streets of New-York. The hotel where I live is really gigantic , with two bathrooms for bedroom, a big swimming-pool , and a big jacuzzi. At the night , I go to the festivals , and I dancing for many hours

Your Best friend , Mathilde.

Je pense avoir fais des fautes de temps car je ne sais jamais quel temps utiliser .. Merci d'avance

[yveslouis]

  Le 27/01/2010 à 18:27, mathou59 a dit :

Bonjour , j'ai un devoir d'anglais , où il faut raconter son voyage à New-York avec ses parents, à sa meilleure amie . Je ne suis pas très forte en Anglais , donc si vous voyez des fautes .. merci d'avance !

Dearest Ashley ,

How are you ? My holidays in New-York are fantastic ! New-York is a beautiful city , and I (have) visited many monuments. I have been at the to Brooklyn Bridge, in the Statue of Liberty, but I really liked the Empire State Building ! My mother had vertigo, so I went with my father, (commence une nouvelle phrase ici) it was fabulous ! It is really high !

Yesterday, I was went shopping with my mother in the streets of New-York/in New York streets. The hotel where I live is really gigantic, with two bathrooms for each bedroom, a big swimming-pool, and a big jacuzzi. At the night , I go to the festivals , and I dancing dance for (many) hours

Your Best friend , Mathilde.

Je pense avoir fait des fautes de temps car je ne sais jamais quel temps utiliser .. Merci d'avance