melissaa Posté(e) le 16 janvier 2010 Signaler Posté(e) le 16 janvier 2010 LIEN POUR LA NOUVELLE http://www.nexuslearning.net/books/holt-eol2/Collection%203/landlady.htm Sujet : Bonjour, je dois imaginer la suite d'une histoire . L'énoncé est le suivant"imagine the story has one more page.Wirte it."L'histoire dont je doit imaginé la suite est écrit par Roald Dahl. Le titre est "The Landlady" Cette histoire est une histoire fantastique qui parle d'une propriètaire de Bed and breakfast trés étrange, en effet, elle ampaille tous ses animaux, son bed and breakfast est désert , Billy le personnage principal est seul . De plus cela fait Trois ans qu'aucun autre client n'est venu dans ce bed and breakfast.je dois écrire le moment ou la propriètaire va le tuer. Voila ma rédaction . J'aimerai savoir si cela correspond bien au sujet . SI MON HISTOIRE EST IMAGINATIVE OU PAS. Merci de me donner des sugesstions pour améliorer ma rédaction. Et de corriger mes fautes de grammaires. JE SUIS PRETE A PAYER DE MON ARGENT DE POCHE CEUX QUI M'AIDENT ! AIDEZ MOI SVP TRAVAIL : Où j'en suis : The last words pronouced by the landlady resonated in billy's head. He could not prevent himself to heard resonated this words"only you" "only you" " only you"... Billy wondered why he was alone in the bed and breakfast and why there had not been any other guests here except him, Christopher Mulhlland and Gregory w.Templ for two or three days.The atmospher was strange and Billy was surprised by the landlady behaviour. In fact, she stuffed all her animals. Billy thought that she was a crazy girl. Billy asked the landlady"Why had not there been any other guests in this bed and breakfast exceptme, C.M and GW.T.?" The landlady ansewered with a littel smille"Do you want to know the turth? "What turth?"repied Billy He started to become anxious and to panic, his cheeks became red. so, the landlady ansewered to Billy"The turth about that it was arrived to C.M and GW.T(la vérité àpropos de ce qui est arrivé à... "What did happen to C.M and GW.T ?"Billy said "They were died" said the landlady Billy was petrified , he did not anderstand that she said. That's why he said "How did M.C and GW.t die?" "Do you want to know the turth ?" said again the landlady with her pleasent face . "What do you want to say ?" Billy asked her "I killed them two or three yeras ago." annouced the landlady. Billy wanted to come out here , he started to andersatand , this landlady was a killer and he became frightened by this landlady. "Are you terrifing?Would you like a cup of tea?" asked the landlady. "No" replied Billy with a shiveringly voice "Maybe are you thinking that I am going to kill you ?"said the landlady "No" ansewered again Billy "I am going to stuff as my animals " howled the landlady "Are you afraid ?"added the landlady "Yes, I am afraid " muttered Billy Suddenly ,the landlady swooped down on Billy as if he was a prey or an animal.She stucked him with her arms . So Billy tried to slip out from The landlady 's arms, but he could not mouve. With energy the landlady tried to catch the teapot in order to spill it on him. But at the same moment (mais au même moment qu'elle s'appraitait à renverser le tea sur lui )The bed and breakfast 's bell rang . Suddenly , the landlady stoped to stuck him with her arms, she stood up with energy and she maded her way mad the hall in order to open the door. She opened the doorand welcomed a new guest with a littel smile. So she said" welcome to the Bed and breakfast, do you find a room for the night? Billy took advantage of the arrival of this futur victim to come out here without the landlady saw him. now billy was in the street , he was relived but at the same time he was disturbed by (ce qu'il avait vécu)Billy jured himself that he will never not retourn in a bed and breakfast . Finaly the pub bell& Dragon would be more to him(finalement la pub aurait été mieux pour lui PROPOSEZ MOI DAUTRES IDEES / FINS ! JATTENDS VOS REPONSES MERCI. LIEN DE LA NOUVELLE http://www.nexuslearning.net/books/holt-eol2/Collection%203/landlady.htm
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