Voix Passive

[mamounette193]

Bonsoir, voici mon sujt pour demain, j'ai fait de mo mlieux, mais pouvez-vous vérifier SVP, merci d'avance

racontez l'histoire de quelque chose qui a changé le monde (de sa création à aujourd'hui) en utilisant la voix passive

Internet began with the development of the first telecommunication networks. The idea of a computer network, allowing the users of various computers to communicate, was concretized by numerous successive stages. This idea was born at the end of 1950s and its practical application began at the end of 1960s, the origin of the project is military and its name is ARPANET .En on 1972, Ray Tomlinson Mit in the point the First important application: the E-mail. The same year was organized the First public demonstration of international Arpanet Computer Communication Conference ( ICCC).

The second stage of the creation of Internet passes by the extension of this first network. At the end of 1980s, Arpanet becomes accessible on one more large scale: the NSF (National Science Foundation) sets up five high-powered computing centres, in which the users can connect, since any place in the United States. The system meets a frank success and opens in the commercial traffic at the beginning of 1990s.

The beginning of 1990s marks the creation of Internet such as we know it today: a network connecting all the networks and the favour with which the different computers can communicate easily between them because they speak about the same language, about the standard Tcp / ip (Transmission Control Protocol Protocol/Internet Protocol).

Today the quasi-totality of frames communicates by e-mail, the children appropriated the tool and introduce their parents, the administration puts itself it with an on-line information department every more complete and successful day. Thanks to Internet, people do not any more need to move. We can make his shopping, inform, command goods or documents, take tickets of plane or train, know schedules, the weather report, we can play, to converse with people of the end of the real-time world … . The list is long.

There is all the same a problem; the quality of the network was more and more polluted by the spam, the virus, Trojan and the other spy wares. But Internet remains all the same a very beautiful invention which facilitates us the life.

[Jean B]

Bonjour et bienvenue sur le forum de e-bahut.

Bonsoir,

Voici mon sujet pour demain, j'ai fait de mon mlieux, mais pouvez-vous vérifier SVP, merci d'avance

racontez l'histoire de quelque chose qui a changé le monde (de sa création à aujourd'hui) en utilisant la voix passive

The Internet began with the development of the first telecommunication networks. The idea of a computer network, allowing the users of various computers to communicate, was <concretized by> realized through numerous successive stages. The idea was born at the end of the 1950s and its practical application began at the end of the 1960s. The origin of the project is military and its name is ARPANET. <En on> In1972, Ray Tomlinson <Mit in the point> developed the first important application: the e-mail. The same year was organized the first public demonstration of international Arpanet Computer Communication Conference ( ICCC).

The second stage of the creation of Internet passes by the extension of this first network. At the end of the 1980s, Arpanet becomes accessible on <one more large> a larger scale: the NSF (National Science Foundation) sets up five high-powered computing centres, in which the users can connect, since any place in the United States. The system meets a frank success and opens in the commercial traffic at the beginning of the 1990s.

The beginning of the 1990s marks the creation of the Internet such as we know it today: a network connecting all the networks and the favour with which the different computers can communicate easily between them because they speak about the same language, about the standard Tcp / ip (Transmission Control Protocol Protocol/Internet Protocol).

Today the quasi-totality of <frames> executives communicate by e-mail, <the> children have appropriated the tool and introduce their parents to it, the <administration> civil service <puts itself> takes to it with an on-line information department becoming every day more complete and successful. Thanks to the Internet, people do not need to move any more. We can do our shopping, get informed, <command> order goods or documents, buy plane or train tickets, know schedules, the weather report. We can also play, <to> converse/chat with people all over the world in real time… The list is long.

Nevertheless, there is a problem: the quality of the network <was> is more and more polluted by <the> spam, <the> viruses, trojans and <the> other spywares. But the Internet remains all the same a very beautiful invention which facilitates <us the> our everyday life.

[mamounette193]

bONSOIR ET MERCI BEAUCOUP POUR VOTRE AIDE. Le devoir m'a été donné aujourd'hui pour demain.

[Jean B]

bONSOIR ET MERCI BEAUCOUP POUR VOTRE AIDE. Le devoir m'a été donné aujourd'hui pour demain.

[yveslouis]

bONSOIR ET MERCI BEAUCOUP POUR VOTRE AIDE. Le devoir m'a été donné aujourd'hui pour demain.