ahmeddur Posté(e) le 10 janvier 2009 Signaler Posté(e) le 10 janvier 2009 bonjour je doit faire une biogaphie sur Louis amstrong.La prof ma donner un texte a trou avec le site que je doit consulter pour avoir les réponses.Pouvez vous me corriger les réponses que je vais mettre seront avec des * c'est t-a dire que c'est cette endroit que j'ai mi ma réponses et aussi si je mes des pointillet c'est-a dire que j'ai pas trouver(pouvez vous me les competer svp c'est-a dire 8 mot) merci voici le texte avec les réponses que j'ai trouver Louis amstrong was born* in New Orleans,Louisiana* in 1881*.His family was an infant* and he was raised by another* woman*.He first learned to play cornet* in the band of the New Orleons Home for Colored Waifs, and he then played in bands................ on the Mississippi.He moved to Chicago in 1922 to play the cornet in a famous playing the trumpet* in an orchestra. He moved to Los Angeles and tourned around Europe before settling permanently in................, New York in.............. He was probably....................... jazz musician of the .................... century and was an excelent ...................; he was really................... at improvising.His nickname was "Satcho" (for "Satchelmouth", because he had a huge mouth).He as also known as a jazz...................... He died in Queens july 6 1971* aged 70. le site c'est:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Louis_Armstrong toute faute sur le site, le site ne marchera pas.respecter la ponctuatiion merci merci de me corriger et de me completer les mot que j'ai pas trouver
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2009 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 11 janvier 2009 Bonjour, La page de Wiki est très complète et facile à lire. Mais il est tout à fait normal que tu ne trouves pas tous les détails demandés du premier coup. Fais-toi une liste des renseignements qui te restent à trouver et cherche-les un par un en lisant la biographie autant de fois que nécessaire jusqu'à ce que tu trouves. Pour cela, aide-toi du sens des phrases incomplètes, de ce qui précède et de ce qui suit le manque à combler. Tu vas y arriver, c'est sûr. Bon travail.
E-Bahut Jean B Posté(e) le 12 janvier 2009 E-Bahut Signaler Posté(e) le 12 janvier 2009 Bonjour, À l'avenir, pense à poster ta réponse dans le fil déjà ouvert au lieu d'en ouvrir un nouveau. J'ai fondu ta réponse dans le message précédent. Même si l'on voit que tu as reçu de l'aide, c'est du très bon travail. Fais attention à la ponctuation. Après un point, tu dois mettre un espace avant de commencer une nouvelle phrase. J'ai rectifié. Bonne continuation. Louis amstrong ............... in New Orleans,.................. in .............His family was ............. and he was raised by .......................He first learned to play ............ in the band of the New Orleons Home for Colored Waifs, and he then played in bands................ on the Mississippi. He moved to Chicago in 1922 to play the cornet in a famous playing the ................ in an orchestra. He moved to Los Angeles and tourned around Europe before settling permanently in................, New York in.............. He was probably....................... jazz musician of the .................... century and was an excelent ...................; he was really................... at improvising.His nickname was "Satcho" (for "Satchelmouth", because he had a huge mouth).He as also known as a jazz...................... He died in Queens .............. aged 70. voici le texte avec les réponses Louis Armstrong was born August 4, 1901 in New Orleans, Louisiana. His family was very poor and he was raised by his grandmother, Josephine Armstrong, and at times, his uncle Isaac. He first learned to play cornet by ear at Dago Tony’s Tonk, then developed his cornet playing seriously in the band of the New Orleans Home for Colored Waifs, and he then played in bands on a steamboat on the Mississippi. He moved to Chicago in 1922 to play the cornet in a famous jazz band, Joe "King" Oliver’s Creole Jazz Band, then to play the trumpet in this orchestra. He moved to Los Angeles and toured around Europe before settling permanently in Queens, New York in 1943. He was probably the most important jazz musician of the 20th (twentieth) century and was an excellent scat singer; he was really skilled at improvising. His nickname was "Satchmo" (for "Satchelmouth", because he had a huge mouth). He is also known as a jazz singer and band leader. He died in Queens July 6 1971 aged 70.
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