Quelqu'un peut corriger?urgent pour demain

[rosina]

Hello,

I am called Rosina. It is Italian. Before continuing my presentation I am going to give you the most important date in history with a big H: December 28, 1987 (It is my date of birth) not to forget to note it in your diary!

I live in a lost corner: L. My neighbor, it is the cow Margherite, she is very 8-) cools and helpful. I laugh. It is true that there are cows but not to all the corners of street as people can think.

My dad is the only boy of the family because we are 3 girls: Marina 12 years, Bettina 7 years and me 15 years. Consecrate harem! And there is one month in addition the family that is enlarged again to my big despair since my parents have prayed a small bitch! The horror! Why? Because dogs it is my phobia! The morning when I rise I hurt so that I am afraid… Forbidden to laugh it is not cool! My father is Italian and my French mom. And even though I was born in France, I am in my Italian cœur. I support Italy on all the points. And then the small Italian are cute… no one can say the opposite. My life is filled well but it is a choice. My friends said that to see me it is necessary to take return yourselves… it is not true, it is just that I make a lot of thing for not that I get bored. I practice the sport: hip hop and volley ball. I am part of an association " the blue " week, it takes me a lot of times but it is well.

I always have listen all takes music then I like all… I even listen to sometimes beloved FM… It is necessary to say it to no one, it is the shame! However I adore Mickael jacksons because he/it dances like a god, he has a terrific goldfish and he carries some too beautiful boxerses! My favorite movie it is " rebel " mind because I find the sad history but beautiful.

Then I also like: durting dancing; challenges. My dream would be to have a husband to unlimited blue card as in pretty woman… A beautiful Italian, live in the south of France, in a magnificent house and to have a superb swimming pool. Not pain, no?? No to go seriously, do I hope to leave lives briskly in the south of France after my studies. To be social worker or jurist. To have a beautiful family of two children. I adore to have the sensation of fear, it is for that that I make the contest raid to Linselles: jump to the rubber band, coming down of the church in recall...etc

[mxtine]

Peut-être un peu tard, mais j'ai corrigé quelques fautes (très rapidement)

bonne chance - good luck

cricri

Hello,

I am called Rosina. I'm Italian. Before continuing my presentation I 'll give you the most important date of History with a big H: December 28, 1987 (It is my date of birth) Don't forget to note it in your diary!

I live in a lost corner: L. My neighbour, it is the cow Margherite, she is very cool and helpful. I'm laughing. It is true that there are cows but not at all the corners of the street as people can think.

My dad is the only boy of the family because we are 3 girls: Marina, 12 years, Bettina, 7 years and me, 15 years. Consecrate harem! One month ago, the family enlarged again to my big despair since my parents have prayed a small bitch! The horror! Why? Because dogs it is my phobia! The morning when I rise I hurt so that I am afraid… Forbidden to laugh it is not cool! My father is Italian and my mum is French. And even though I was born in France, I am in Italian in my heart. I support Italy on all the possible points. And then the small Italian are cute… no one can say the opposite. My life is well filled but it is a choice. My friends said that in order to see me it is necessary to take return yourselves… it is not true, it is just that I make a lot of things for not getting bored. I practice sports: hip hop and volley ball. I take part in an association " the blue " week, it takes me a lot of time but it is good.

I always listen to all sorts of musics, then I like all… I even listen sometimes to beloved FM… It is necessary to say it to no one, it is the shame! However I adore Michael Jackson because he dances like a god, he has a terrific goldfish and he carries some too beautiful boxers! My favourite movie it is " rebel " mind because I find the history sad but so beautiful.

Then I also like: dirting dancing; challenges. My dream would be to have a husband with an unlimited blue card as in pretty woman… A beautiful Italian, living in the South of France, in a magnificent house and to have a superb swimming pool. Not pain, no?? No to go seriously, do I hope to leave lives briskly in the Ssouth of France after my studies. To be a social worker or jurist. To have a beautiful family of two children. I like to have the sensation of fear, it is for all that I make the contest raid to Linselles: jump to the rubber band, coming down of the church in recall...etc

[cactusjo]

I'm in a hurry , sorry

bur still too many mistakes !

attention aux traductions litérales ! :evil:

ex : "ON file à l'anglaise"

mais les Anglais filent à la française !( THEY take a french leave : WE take an english leave !) :mrgreen:

je reviens si possible :wink: