Writing

[bettygirl]

bonjour j'ai fait un Writing et j'aimerais si c'est possible que vous me le corrigiez ou me donniez votre avis.

Imagine you are on a holiday trip in a city where you're spending your dream holiday . write to a friend to tell her about it. include details about:the country you are in. the weather, your company,where you're staying ,the people in that country,your coming plans, and your feelings and impressions;

Dear Amina:

How are you and who is your family? for my next holiday trip i want to spend it in Paris .this is my only dream in my life .

I'm planing to travelling by plane with my family on June. i guest the weather will be wonderful in this period ;sunny and agreeable

and i planning to staying in a modern hotel near the shopping centre because i want to buying some things for presents for my family.

and i am also hopping to meet a new people and eating in a Nice's french restaurants ;i like them food .

[thebestfriends]

  bettygirl a dit :

bonjour j'ai fait un Writing et j'aimerais si c'est possible que vous me le corrigiez ou me donniez votre avis.

Imagine you are on a holiday trip in a city where you're spending your dream holiday . write to a friend to tell her about it. include details about:the country you are in. the weather, your company,where you're staying ,the people in that country,your coming plans, and your feelings and impressions;

Dear Amina:

How are you and who is your family? for my next holiday trip i want to spend it in Paris .this is my only dream in my life .

I'm planing to travelling by plane with my family on June. i guest the weather will be wonderful in this period ;sunny and agreeable

and i planning to staying in a modern hotel near the shopping centre because i want to buying some things for presents for my family.

and i am also hopping to meet a new people and eating in a Nice's french restaurants ;i like them food .