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Bonsoir, y aurait-il une âme charitable qui voudrais bien m'aider à corriger mon devoir s'il vous plaît, car mon assistant pédagogique du lycée m'a fait faux bond aujourd'hui :/ De plus, c'est à rendre pour demain. Je vous en remercie d'avance.

Sujet: Would you be ready to go and live abroad? Why or Why not?

Intro :

To go and live abroad request a long reflexion on the plan economical, political and social, because we must still be prepared to change life. It is not necessary to go very far to find a very different country from France : it is only necessary to cross the Channel to discover Great Britain...

I

Personally, i would be ready to leave abroad to travel, to see monuments such as the famous Big Ben and sure another painting of life. Moreover, it would be interesting to discover other cultures (litterature, music, etc...), other landscapes (parks, lakes : ex. lake district) and another lifestile (driving on the left...)

The fact of developing a language such as the English is an exceptional opportunity because it is universal, is spoken and understood almost all. However, the people wishing to settle in Great Britain would belong to another territory. But to change housing, work, life quite simply, doesn't it ask a part of madness, not ?

II

However, i would leave but i would not settle in Great Britain because it would be too difficult to leave my family.

Futhermore, the language may cause communication problems in relation to various regional languages like the scot ( scotland) irish (nothern irland), welsh (wales) where most of the words are impronounceable, they look weird.

The weather also brings on part of hesitation because rain and moisture are part of everyday life. For example it is much colder in Scotland than elsewhere. I am clinging to Corsica and is moderate climate.

Yet, the tradition and foods of British interests me, for example their particular humour which i like very much in Mr Bean. But also, meal times (5/6 o'clock pm), the way they cook, their tastes : sweetered/salted mixture and the food boiled like "carrotes cake" or "porridge", without forgetting the tea time crowned. For example, food in Irland is tasteless, almost inedible because they are bad at cooking.

Still, i would be afraid to not to be integrated in relation to mentality ; because we know dear friend reader that the English are very proud of their land and can have various reactions to other countries.

On the one hand, there is a high rate of communauty, but on the other hand, they see themselves as the most civilised people. So, i blam them for having a superiority complex, for being self-centered. I stress the fact that the english are very contemptous towards other countries. They live on an island and the continent seems to be a threat.

conclusion :

They must stop will be taken to the center of the world, no longer consider the nations around them or other as foreigners.We are neighbours, after all : France, the Netherlands, Denmark.

Finally, Great Britain is a wonderful country and rich, but i love my life and i would not feel ready to settle me and live over there.

[McFLY27]

voilà esperons que ca t'aidera!

Intro :

To go and live abroad request a long reflexion economically, politically and socially, because we have to be prepared to change life. It is not necessary to go very far to find a very different country from France : it is only necessary to cross the Channel to discover Great Britain... (n’oublie pas l’annonce de tes axes)

I

Personally, i would be ready to leave abroad to travel, to see monuments such as the famous Big Ben and sure another painting of life ??? Tu veux dire quoi avec ça?. Moreover, it would be interesting to discover other cultures (litterature, music, etc...), other landscapes (parks, lakes : ex. lake district) and another lifestyle (driving on the left...)

The fact of developing a language such as pas de THE English is an exceptional opportunity because it is universal, is spoken and understood almost everywhere (all = tout everywhere= partout). However, the people wanting to settle in Great Britain would belong to another territory. But to change housing, work, life quite simply (ce n‘est pas vraiment qqch. Qui se dit: si tu veut dire la vie quotidienne, de ce qu‘on a l‘habitude = living ou life style), doesn't it ask a part of madness, not ? si tu veux faire une phrase avec NOT (qui est d’ailleurs faux car c’est du language parlé) derrière, n’utilise pas déjà la forme de négation au début. Ce sont deux négations et c’est pas correct, c’est plutôt négation-et puis la forme positive ou la forme positive-négation, alors je te propose la phrase suivante = it asks/seeks/requests a kind of madness, doesn’t it?

II

However i would leave, vergule ici, pas de but) i would not settle in Great Britain because it would be too difficult to leave my family.

Futhermore, the language may cause communication problems. (mets un point) in relation to various regional languages like SCOTTISH (pas de THE) ( scotland) irish (nothern irland), welsh (wales) where most of the words are UNpronounceable AND look weird.

The weather also supplies (bring est pour qqch. À qqn, supply est plus convenable pour « fournir ») a part of hesitation because rain and moisture are part of everyday life. For example it is much colder in Scotland than anywhere else. I am clinging (tu est collé à?)to Corsica and it’s moderate climate.

Yet, the traditions and food (food n’a pas de pluriel…) of THE (oui oui, ici tu peut mettre le fameux THE) British interests me, for example their particular sense of humour which i like very much. for example in Mr Bean. But also, dinnertime (5/6 o'clock pm), the way they cook, their tastes : sweetered/salted mixture and (pas de the) food boiled like "carrote(pas de s) cake" or "porridge", without forgetting the tea time crowned. For example, food in Irland is tasteless, almost inedible because they are bad at cooking.(wow, t’as été ou en Irlande pour avoir de la mauvaise nourriture??)

Still, i would be afraid about not to being integrated in relation to mentality ; because we know dear friend/reader that the English are very proud of their land and can have various reactions to other countries.

On (toujours pas de THE) one hand, there is a high rate of community, but on the other hand, they see themselves as the most civilised people. So, i blame them for having a superiority complex, for being self-centered. I stress the fact that the english are very contemptous towards other countries. They live on an island and the continent seems to be a threat.

conclusion :

They must stop willing being taken for the center of the world and no longer consider the nations around them or others as foreigners. We are neighbours, after all : France, the Netherlands, Danmark.

Finally, Great Britain is a wonderful country and rich, but i love my life and i do not feel ready to settle down and live over there.