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[chieuzzeuh]

Coucou à tous !

Voilà j'avais 3 questions à faire en Anglais pour demain, le seul problème c'est que moi et la grammaire anglaise sa fais 2 !

Donc si quelqu'un à la temps de me corriger les fautes je le remercie d'avance

1)How far should parents interfere in young people's decisions ?

So that a child have a great education, I think parents must impose limits as soon as it is a kid.Because when they will grow up they don't respect rules. So the parents must intervene very early. If a child is more free, he can make mistakes ans get dangerous. Parents must intervene when children don't think about consequences of their actions. Parents should advise children for their future.

2) How do you imagine your future when you are twenty-five? Is there a job you would particulary like to do ? Why? Do you have a dream ? What is it ?

When I'll be twenty-five, I would live around Paris with ,maybe, my future boyfriend. I would work at criminal brigade (PJ) because I need a job with action and I like the area. I like help people and I think it is a great job. At the future, I would go to visit USA ( Florida , New -York, Las Vegas...) and Australia. I would live in South West of France ( Biarritz , Dax...) when I'll be retired.

3)Whould you stop seeing your family if they disapproved of you choice of a career ?

It's impossible that I stop seeing my family if they disapproved my choice of a career because, she is so important for me. It's sacred ! It is my career and if they have anything to say , they say me but I'll see my family whatever they thinks.

Voilà donc merci d'avance à celui ou celle qui voudras bien me corriger ^^

[Jean B]

Bonjour, (pas très sympa ton pseudo ! )

1)How far should parents interfere in young people's decisions ?

So that children can have a great education, I think parents must impose limits on them as early as they are kids. Unless parents do so, their children will grow up without respecting any rules. So parents must intervene very early. If a child is more free, he can make mistakes and get dangerous. Parents must intervene when children don't think of the consequences of their actions. Parents should advise children for their future.

2) How do you imagine your future when you are twenty-five? Is there a job you would particulary like to do ? Why? Do you have a dream ? What is it ?

When I am twenty-five, I would like to live around Paris with ,maybe my future boyfriend. I would work with the Criminal Investigation Department (Police Judiciaire) because I need a job with action and I like the area. I like to help people and I think it is a great job. In the future, I would like to visit the USA ( Florida , New -York, Las Vegas...) and Australia. I would live in South West of France ( Biarritz , Dax...) when I have retired.

3)Whould you stop seeing your family if they disapproved of you choice of a career ?

It's impossible that I stop seeing my family if they disapproved my choice of a career because, it is so important to me. It's sacred ! It is my career and if they have anything to say , they will tell me but I'll keep on seeing my family whatever they think.

Voilà donc merci d'avance à celui ou celle qui voudras bien me corriger ^^

* Attention au temps du verbe dans la subordonnée au futur introduite par when/as soon as. Seul le verbe de la principale se met au futur. Celui de la subordonnée reste au présent. C'est à savoir, jeune fille !

Quand j'aurai 25 ans, ... = When I am twenty-five, ...

* De la même manière, le futur antérieur se rendra par un present perfect.

Quand j'aurai pris ma retraite, ... = When I have retired, ... C'est à savoir aussi, jeune fille !

Dans l'ensemble, tu ne te débrouilles qunad même pas si mal que ça.

[chieuzzeuh]

Bonjour, (pas très sympa ton pseudo ! )

1)How far should parents interfere in young people's decisions ?

So that children can have a great education, I think parents must impose limits on them as early as they are kids. Unless parents do so, their children will grow up without respecting any rules. So parents must intervene very early. If a child is more free, he can make mistakes and get dangerous. Parents must intervene when children don't think of the consequences of their actions. Parents should advise children for their future.

2) How do you imagine your future when you are twenty-five? Is there a job you would particulary like to do ? Why? Do you have a dream ? What is it ?

When I am twenty-five, I would like to live around Paris with ,maybe my future boyfriend. I would work with the Criminal Investigation Department (Police Judiciaire) because I need a job with action and I like the area. I like to help people and I think it is a great job. In the future, I would like to visit the USA ( Florida , New -York, Las Vegas...) and Australia. I would live in South West of France ( Biarritz , Dax...) when I have retired.

3)Whould you stop seeing your family if they disapproved of you choice of a career ?

It's impossible that I stop seeing my family if they disapproved my choice of a career because, it is so important to me. It's sacred ! It is my career and if they have anything to say , they will tell me but I'll keep on seeing my family whatever they think.

Voilà donc merci d'avance à celui ou celle qui voudras bien me corriger ^^

* Attention au temps du verbe dans la subordonnée au futur introduite par when/as soon as. Seul le verbe de la principale se met au futur. Celui de la subordonnée reste au présent. C'est à savoir, jeune fille !

Quand j'aurai 25 ans, ... = When I am twenty-five, ...

* De la même manière, le futur antérieur se rendra par un present perfect.

Quand j'aurai pris ma retraite, ... = When I have retired, ... C'est à savoir aussi, jeune fille !

Dans l'ensemble, tu ne te débrouilles qunad même pas si mal que ça.