besoin d'une correction c'est urgent

[soane]

Bonjour j'aimerai savoir si vius pourriez me corriger mes fautes pour aujourd'hui je vous en remerci d'avance

All is question of time and offer of information. Our company is more the same one as ten years ago, especially in the United States where the progression of the Internet was fulgurating and former to that which one currently knows in France. Information does not come systematically any

more to us, but it is necessary to go to seek it. Where: the press, television, the Internet... but it takes time to go to seek it and the everyday life of all one each one is minutée so much that the choice is

often made make the dead end on this subject. The media are a topic to be exploited with the diffussion of quantity of chains as well on the level of the cable as the satellite. Do not speak one rightly about the generation "zapping". The children are high with a remote control with the hand, zappent of chain in chain without taking the time of the reflexion. This was scientifically studied by sociologists and one of the conclusions was in a few words to note that this operating mode impacts

the life of tous.les.jours. It is necessary to quickly do all without really going until the end of the things... Not time to read, look at, to listen, a fortiori when it is a question of being interested in the

news... And then, an important fact, it acts of young people... The young people must benefit from their youth, have fun, divert themselves, there are already the studies, if it is necessary to pass the

week end to listen to the 20H and to read the world!!! Hard hard...

[Mamehaa]

Hello !

Je pense que tu n'as pas de fautes,je n' en distingue pas mais je comprends pas le mot fortiori,tu as laissé un mot en français au début de ton deuxième paragraphe je crois c'est je traduis : the life of everyday .

Sinon je trouve ton anglais bon.

Bisous

[soane]

je te remerci beaucoup