correction de mon devoir SVP

[projet_11]

Bonjour!

Si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger les fautes du texte suivant, ce serait super sympa!

Merci par avance.

Our project has been order by teachers of electronics (professeurs d'électrotechnique). This professors names M. X and M.Y. They teach in the department GEII in Grenoble (département GEII de grenoble). This department welcome every year students who are High-level sportsmen (sportifs de haut niveau) what means that they must study at home (travailler à distance). They uses Internet for corresponding with their teachers and have lessons and exercises.

That's why, these professors wants to develop animated on-line class (cours animés en ligne). Our project has been divided in three part. A part to make animated electronics circuits (circuits electronique animés),a part to make QCM (même chose en anglais?)and a part for the data base. These two first parts will create files intended to be on line. There is always on-line class(cours en ligne) which are in the size PDF but they found that this size was not really attractive. So they would like to have a software that enable their to create animated electric circuits without they have to tape lines of programming.

Include in this software, they also want to have a part for realizing on line questionnaires. Statistics will be done for each studiants who realize the qcm. So a data base has been created for storing data about their and an (interface) enable us to have and to modify data in the data base.

This program has been done with the software macromedia director although several other solutions had been consider. (like the software flash or the programming language java).

At the beginning they also wanted to have a part who allow to create tutorials(td ?) intended to be on-line in html without they have to know this language. Like we know that the part for the animation would be very long and difficult and that the fonctionnality of the tutorial were very easy to realize in html ,we come to an agreement (nous nous sommes mis d'accord) with our customers to write specification of the mainly functions of html illustrated with example .So they will make themself their on-line tutorials.

The first two weeks were given over(consacré) to the study of the market, the working-out of specification(cahier des charges?) and of the file of production. Then and during five weeks, we have realize the software and the data base.

The two last week were donated(consacré) to the debbugage and improvement of the software according to the grant of our customers.

Regulary we have seen our customers what allow to give their a product to-measure(produit sur mesure). Moreover we have often correspondate by e-mail for asking us little questions and for avoiding them the displacement. They answered often very rapidly. So we have had a good relation with them.

[cactusjo]

Bonjour!

Si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger les fautes du texte suivant, ce serait super sympa!

Merci par avance.

Our project has been orderED by teachers of electronics (professeurs d'électrotechnique). ThESE  professors ARE MR. X and MR.Y. They teach in the  GEII department (GEII) in Grenoble (département GEII de grenoble). This department welcomeS every year students who are High-level sportsmen (sportifs de haut niveau) what means( that) they must study at home (travailler à distance). They uses Internet for correspond( à trouver le verbe correct with their teachers and have lessons and exercises.

 That's why these professors wants to develop animated on-line class (cours animés en ligne). Our project has been divided in three partS. FIRST : to make animated electronics circuits (circuits electronique animés),a part to make QCM (même chose en anglais?)and a part for the data base. These two first parts will create files intended to be on line. There is always on-line class(cours en ligne) which are in the size PDF but they found that this size was not really attractive. So they would like to have a software that enableS thEM  to create animated electric circuits without (they) havING to tape lines of programming.  

IncludeD in this software, they also want to have a part (?)  TO realizE on line questionnaires. Statistics will be done for each studEnts who realize the qcm. So a data base has been created for storing data about their (??!!)....and an (interface)WILL  enable us to have DATA and to modify THEM in the data base.

This program has been done with the software macromedia director THOUGH several other solutions had been considerED TOO BEFORE. (like the software flash or the programming language java).

At the beginning they also wanted to have a part who WOULD allow to create tutorials(td ?) intended to be on-line in html without (they) havING to know this language.AS we knEw that the part for the animation would be very long and difficult and that the fonctionnality of the tutorial were very easy to realize in html ,we cAme to an agreement (nous nous sommes mis d'accord) with our customers to write specification of the mainly functions of html illustrated with example .So they will make themselVES  their on-line tutorials.

The first two weeks were given over(consacré) to the study of the market, the working-out of specification(cahier des charges?) and of the file of production. Then and during five weeks,  we have realizeD the software and the data base.

The two last week were DEVOTED (consacré) to the debbugage and improvement of the software according to the grant  (??!!) of our customers.

we have REGULARLY (seen)MET our customers ,what allowS US  to give theM a product to-measure(produit sur mesure). Moreover we (have) often correspondate ( trouver le verbe adéquat by e-mail for THEM TO ask us little questions and TO avoid(ing) them the displacement( autre mot . They OFTEN ( or : MOST OF THE TIME answered  very QUICKLY. So we have had a good relationSHIP with them.

[cactusjo]

TEACHERS

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"professors " :evil: :roll: :mrgreen: :?

[cactusjo]

Retrouvé des fôtes":)!!

Bonjour!

Si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger les fautes du texte suivant, ce serait super sympa!

Merci par avance.

Our project has been orderED by teachers of electronics (professeurs d'électrotechnique). ThESE  professors ( TEACHERS ARE MR. X and MR.Y. They teach in the  GEII department (GEII) in Grenoble (département GEII de grenoble). This department welcomeS every year students who are High-level sportsmen (sportifs de haut niveau) , what means( that) they (must) HAVE TO study at home (travailler à distance). They use(s) Internet TO correspond( à trouver le verbe correct with their teachers and have lessons and exercises.

 That's why these professors wants to develop animated on-line classES (cours animés en ligne). Our project has been divided in three partS. FIRST : to make animated electronics circuits (circuits electronique animés),THEN   makING QCM (même chose en anglais?)and a part for the data base. These two first parts will create files intended to be on line. There ARE (always) on-line classES(cours en ligne)TOO , which are in the  PDF  size but they found that this size was not really attractive. So they would like to have a software that enableS thEM  to create animated electric circuits without (they) havING to tape lines of programming.  

IncludeD in this software, they also want to have a part (?)  TO realizE on line questionnaires. Statistics will be done for each studEnts who realize the qcm. So a data base has been created TO storE data about theM (??!!)....and an (interface)WILL  enable us to have DATA and to modify THEM in the data base.

This program has been done with the (software) macromedia director SOFTWARE THOUGH several other solutions had been considerED TOO BEFORE. (like the software flash or the programming language java).

At the beginning they also wanted to have a part whICH  WOULD allow to create tutorials(td ?) , intended to be on-line in html without (they) havING to know this language.AS we knEw that the part for the animation would be very long and difficult and that the fonctionnality of the tutorial wAS  very easy to realize in html ,we cAme to an agreement (nous nous sommes mis d'accord) with our customers to write specification of the mainly functions of html illustrated with example .So they will make themselVES  their on-line tutorials.

The first two weeks were DEVOTED (given over)(consacré) to the study of the market, the working-out of specification(cahier des charges?) and (of) the (file of )production FILE. Then and during five weeks,  we have realizeD the software and the data base.

The (two) last TWO week were DEVOTED (consacré) to the debugage and improvement of the software according to the grant  (??!!) of our customers.

we have REGULARLY (seen)MET our customers ,what allowS US  to give theM a product to-measure(produit sur mesure). Moreover we (have) often correspondate ( trouver le verbe adéquat by e-mail for THEM TO ask us little questions and TO avoid(ing) them the displacement( autre mot . They OFTEN ( or : MOST OF THE TIME )answered  very QUICKLY. So we have had a good relationSHIP with them AND WE KEPT VERY CLOSE.

[projet_11]

merci beaucoup

[cactusjo]

a pleasure :roll: :wink:

merci beaucoup  

[cactusjo]

SORRY mais le résu est loin d'être plus que parfait , là encore

mais tu devrais déjà assurer là ! :evil:

a pleasure  :roll:  :wink:  

merci beaucoup  

[mxtine]

Bonjour,

J’espère que ces quelques corrections pourront t’aider, mais je ne suis toutefois pas une “native”.

mxtine

Our project has been ordered by teachers of electronic. This teachers named M. X and M.Y. teach in the GEII department of Grenoble. Every year this department welcomes students who are High-level sportsmen what means that they have to study at home. They use Internet to correspond with their teachers and to take lessons and make exercises.

It’s the reason why these professors want to develop lively on-line classes. Our project has been divided in three parts. The first one is to make animated electronic circuits, the second is to realize a QCM and third one to create a data base. The two first parts will create files intended to be on line. There is always an on-line class which is in the PDF size but this size didn’t seem to be not really attractive. So the department would like to create a software that enables them to create animated electric circuits without having to tape lines of programming.

As an integral part of this software, they also want to realize on line questionnaires. Statistics will be done for each student who realizes the QCM. So a data base has been created for storing datas about these results and an interface enables us to have and modify data in the data base.

This program has been realized with the software macromedia director and although several other solutions have been considered, like the software flash or the programming language java).

At the beginning they also wanted to have a part that allows us to create tutorials. The aim of them is to be on-line in html without they having to know this language. However we know that the part for the animation would be very long and difficult and that the functionality of the tutorial was very easy to realize in html, we have come to an agreement with our customers to write specification of the mainly functions of html illustrated with example. So they will make themselves their on-line tutorials.

The first two weeks were given over to the study of the market, the working-out of specification and file of production. Then and during other five weeks, we have realized the software and the data base.

The two last weeks were devoted to the debugged problems and improvement of the software according to the grant of our customers.

Regularly we have seen our customers in order to give them a to measure product. Moreover we have often corresponded by e-mail to ask them little questions and avoid them unnecessary moving. In most of the cases they answered rapidly, so we have had a positive and good relation with them. :wink: