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simple correction pour lundi3 mars


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_ hello grany! How are you? I happy. I want to now what was my fasther before?

- Your father was tall and slim, he was a short blond hair.

_ Where were you livi before?

_ We were live in the big cottage wich ducks, pigs, chickens and horses.

_ Was he best at school?

_ He was a best at school in biology but he wasn't good in maths.

_ How was his first girl-friend?

_ I don't now because your father was very very lover so he don't want to said me who his first girl-friend.

merci de me corriger les fautes d'orthographe, de temps et les mal dit. donner moi une note sur 20 :P

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_ hello grany! How are you? I AM happy. I want to Know : what was my father LIKE before?

- Your father was tall and slim, he was a short blond hair.

..., he had short blond hair.

_ Where were you livi before?

Where did you live before?

_ We were live in the big cottage wich ducks, pigs, chickens and horses.

We lived in A big.. WITH ducks...

_ Was he best at school? (De qui parles-tu ??? :) )

Was he/my father good at school ?

_ He was a best at school in biology but he wasn't good in maths.

He was good at Biology...good AT Maths

_ How was his first girl-friend?

What did his first girl-friend look like ?

_ I don't Know because your father was very very lover so he don't want to said me who his first girl-friend.

...your father had a lot of girl-friends so he didn't want to tell me who his first girl-friend was.

:) Allons ! Soyons cool et allons jusqu'à la moyenne :D:D

Plus sérieusement, fais bien attention à tes constructions... :evil: :wink:

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